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lonelyQuadover 6 years agoGREAT PLOT
You need some editing but I love your plot weaving. I'm stressed as to the hero's situation but patient to wait for the next chapter...
Anonymousover 6 years agoBravo
Very enjoyable. Look forward to the continued growth of the tale. Well done.
rightbankover 6 years agoIt keeps getting better
It will be interesting to see where we go from here.
An interesting twist on the Golden Rule
What ever you plan to do to me
I will do to you.
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