All Comments on 'After the Pensioners Coach Trip'
by rockycoveboy
- 16 Comments
Anonymousover 6 years ago...much enjoyed by this 75-year old reader. Thanks!
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Anonymousabout 6 years agoIf you are going to have an illustrated story of any kind, let alone of an erotic nature, go ahead and illustrate it. In this 4 page story you had 2 pictures, both of the main character's boots and that's it...?!? That's like a good cook book with no photos of finished recipe results and only a vague drawing of a wooden spoon through out there entire volume. Illustrate your material (or don't). We've already made the choice to read this kind of literature so illustrations aren't going to shock us...
Nice story line by the way...
CrazyNewAdventurerabout 6 years agoIf you dropped the pics and placed this in either Mature or Group Sex... It would've been better. Still... 5 stars.
Swee282about 6 years agoWow, what a wonderful story, this is something I would love to see my wife doing. Nothing more sexy for me,
Annatartywifeabout 6 years agowow what a great story and so well and thoughtfully written. Lovely stuff, got my knicks off in no time reading this LOL
LEATBTabout 6 years agoThat is just my type of story! I hope the dirty old sods get their hands on her again soon, she obviously loves it so they should get a few more mates involved!
Well done.
SubmissiveAudreyover 5 years agoThis was a great story! Well written and extremely graphic. Just how I like them. ;) I really enjoyed it. You have to watch out for those dirty old men ;) … or maybe you don't wanna :)
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI like stories that are believable and Wendy coming from a small town, helping an older man with his lawn etc and not getting enough attention from her husband were very erotic stories. Continue with more with Wendy...Fantastic.
Anonymousover 4 years agoWendy sounds like and looks like a very sexy woman!!! Keep the Wendy stories coming!
J2647over 3 years agoHere I am, a 70ish fellow just wishing there was a lovely Wendy near by. Maybe the garden story was a bit nicer. Not so many involved.
Anonymousover 2 years agoSuperb. Developed slowly and erotically, the mark of a singularly talented author.
Anonymousover 2 years agoYour stories are incredible and I always cum really hard as I read them, Thank you so much and please keep on writing new stuff!
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