All Comments on 'Me & Emily & Daddy's Cum Ch. 03'

but the best line was: "I had never felt so loved or so lost". There's an amazing ring of truth to that. A very well done set of stories

Incredibly sexy story. Makes some of the other stories on the site look just amateurish. How many ways are there to say I loved it.

well written!

Thank you for inviting us (the reader) inside "your" mind during such an erotic event........Delightful !!

mmmmmmmmmmmm a very sexy story that rocks and i wish i could b the dad in this story too.

wow what a great story. it reminds me of some of my past with my dad but we were alone when we did it

That story was aweosme and detailed great!!!

I loved every word in it.

The daughter's description of being fucked was awesome. Greta writing. Great imagination

Great story, highly erotic and well written, but shaving cream for lube? other than that it was great.

What a dirty old man! I'm there with that...Men are so...human...and nasty...and dirty...and what a fantasy! None better...

I could taste Emily's kiss, I could feel the machine, I could see Daddy....yumm

shaving cream was not a good thing to have in the story....trust me women don't use it at all..it would irritate the skin and make sex not pleasurable. overall a great story though.

If only my dad would have *ucked me like that!!!!! It made me sooo wet! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you.

Absolutely fantastic story. One of the best in the Literotica series.

The opening chapter setting up the sex scene is a wonderful element missing from most of the erotic stories I read. The teasing nature leading up to the climax makes this story worth reading more than once.

I first read this story about 6 months ago, when I origonally found Literotica! I searched to find it many times again but I didn't succeed until the new format came out and I did a Tag search for "Symbian"!

There are so many great aspects to this story that it is hard to respond to all of them.

First of all, I love Daddy incest stories. Don't know why though, I've never been turned on by my own daughter at all. I guess it is the innocence of your characters. Even first time stories don't excite me much, but the loss or gift of innocence does!

The concept of two virgin friends finding a symbian is great! I loved reading of their expectations and the results of Emily's trial run were erotic beyond belief!

Thank you for such a well written story. It will always be a favorite!

Series was great, very enjoyable read! Thank you for taking the time to work on these stories!

Would've gone somewhere else than shaving cream though...as others have mentioned, the reality would've been less than pleasant.

Slight correction - it's 'Sybian' - no 'm'

Hope to see some more chapters added here even though there hasn't been any updates in your stories for a long time. Really good story.

Wow! This short series was fantastic. Loved your style of writing. The character development. The climax and ending. Simply awesome. Thanks for writing and sharing!

I really like this author's writings.

That was pretty awesome, all in all! Dad was a little douchey though, with his whole 'just relax your throat' bullshit with a girl whos never even sucked a dick before. Should have bent him over the bed, grabbed the shaving jel can and said 'just relax your ass!' And proceeded to shove it where the sun doesnt shine and see if his careless attitude changes!

I like this series, however I do agree with mike2501, daddy could have been a little gentler. I really liked the interplay between the girls!

And just an aside, the machine is a SYBIAN. Symbian is an operating system for handheld devices! :)

This was such an erotic story from start to finish.

The interplay with the daughter and her friend made it a very sexy story. Unrealistic though it may be!

this was bloody awesome!

well deserved 5 stars

A unique story with rich imagery. Several steps above nearly everything else on this site. I hope your other stories are as well written!!