All Comments on 'Captain Terdy's First Week: Day 06 PM'

by HollisChester

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 6 years ago
I suppose all good things

But please, write more of their adventures.

I loved this

Plus you're one awesome artist.

PhiroEpsilonPhiroEpsilonover 6 years ago
A funny end for a funny story

Five stars.

Baldeagle58Baldeagle58over 6 years ago
Another voyage please!

I have loved this whole series featuring Captain Born Yes Terdy and her wonderful crew.

The accompanying artwork has been wonderful throughout the series. If Literotica could have a ‘Favourite Series’ button, it would have been clicked by now.

I hope you have plans for another voyage for this crew, their characters are too good to be used only once.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A week has 7 days.

You need at least one more day of this story.

jane marwoodjane marwoodover 6 years ago
You seem to have mastered your art program.

Certainly more natural than most Poser or similar programs I have seen. Would love to know what the program is. But I do realise that it is down to the skill and hard work of the artist. Five star seems inadequate in your case.

HollisChesterHollisChesterover 6 years agoAuthor
Jane, re what program I used

I used daz3d and a pile of models from their store. I don't really model myself.

Thanks for you kind words.

kat4funnkat4funnover 6 years ago
Thanks

The story has me very excited. I hope you'll continue with the crew. Great series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
fun ride

Found this series the other day and have thoroughly enjoyed the trip. Its so hard to write funny + sex. Thanks for the read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Truly amazing...

I don't know which was better, the story, or the incredible pictures that accompanied it. Well done in every respect. I've paid good money for stories not anywhere as well written or illustrated. Thank you very much.

HollisChesterHollisChesterover 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks for all the encouraging comments all. You might want to check out the web comic I just finished: http://bettysbigrebound.the-comic.org/

bad_hobbitbad_hobbitalmost 3 years ago

Like every chapter of this story, this deserves 5 stars. The storyline is inventive, the vein of humour just at the right level, and the illustrations are hot, hot hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Its funny that lm commenting years after u published this... Bt l give it five stars! It ws 'hoottty' in captain Yes's voice

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