All Comments on 'Fantasy Football Players Ch. 03'

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Pinupfan53Pinupfan53over 6 years ago
Fun Fantasy

Love it. Getting carried away together is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
After leaving my wife in bed with her new lover

I never saw either of them again. I got all the money we had and left town. They all got fired and ended up as street walkers and pimps, you figure out who was what. because I and most of us don't care.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

more cuck shit.

TarcoTronTarcoTronover 6 years ago
nice

I like the part, that finally Freddy also got some action with his wife. More of that.

Some guys taking this all way too serious. It's just a story nothing more nothing less.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
To the asshole below me

It takes an even sicker skit to spend his days reading porn and posting negative comments after he's already spurted his measly two drops into a tissue. Loser

TediumsShadowTediumsShadowover 6 years ago
awesome !

top notch sexual scenes

I do hope this tale continues, and with the caliber of gooeyness piled on!

may I ask / please / beg

for a couple scenes of 'mental cucking' for lack of a better term

verbal hot teasing of husband by sexy wife

some 'alone time' wife with 'the team', say a day or 2, 3? more?

(communicating the gooiest parts by phone / facetime of course)

more than simple physical intimacy , perhaps hints of emotional attachment?

lastly shaking things up a bit

get husband out of his comfort zone

(I liked the subtleness it was revealed that wife was busy while he was at work)

by this I mean pulling wife into situations husband doesn't fully intend

introduce, even minutely, the peril of losing wife to her lover (s)

this peril, even in the smallest amount, coupled with your gift for sex scenes would send the thrills into the stratosphere !

have fun writing!

Zarek11Zarek11over 6 years ago
LOL

Some people calling this story sick and offending others, none the less they STILL continue to read the story. For me that's the definition of a hypocrisy. Of course, you can critizice a story. But there is no need to call others sick, just because they have a different opinion. It's hilarious.

tattoostattoosover 6 years ago
tattoos

Queen of spades tattoo on each tit would be hot. Love the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cuck shit!!!

Only pathetic!!!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 6 years ago
Other than the fact that you have no idea how women act or what it feels like to get

Fucked for hours, or how sore your pussy feels after being rubbed raw, stretched and pounded, how you run the risk of a serious yeast infection and how sticky cum feels as it dries or how hard it is to get out of your hair. It wasn't too bad.

But let's be honest, neither of them are actually in love with each other, despite their multiple declarations of undying love. After all, if you love someone, you won't want to see them degraded by other men and you sure as fuck won't tolerate being treated like a piece of shit they way hubby treats her. He doesn't love her, he loves watching her be treated like a cocksleeve.

ChcanyonChcanyonover 6 years ago
It's fantasy, Duh!

Of course it's not realistic, it's fantasy! And an awesome one at that! Great visuals on the sex scenes. Not too much time spent on their history - just right. Loved the extended seduction starting at the party, then the nightclub. I also liked that the cuckolding wasn't brutal and mean to the husband. It was what he wanted, but shocking in her reaction to bbc. I would love to read #4 starting with the wife describing what she was going through mentally, emotionally, and physically the whole time. That would be an amazing retell. Also, reveal what went down while hubby was at work. It needs closure with the husband and wife discussing the events and where they are going from here. Keep writing please, and fuck the haters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Athletes, actors , musicians etc famous people in general fuck woman on the road all the time. They like the idea of fucking famous people. It even starts in college , the athletes fuck whenever they want . There is even a story about Sarah Paulin before she was a politician. She fucked a college basketball player. There was a joke about how she took his big black dick up her ass, I think she was a reporter at the time. They were both at least single at the time

icebreadicebreadover 6 years ago
It's a story for fucks sake

Good story but just a story.....Or perhaps he had a pen and paper with him and was writing as it happend.....

makelovenowmakelovenowover 6 years ago
Sexy hot wife.

How I wish I could experienced having sex with another man's wife.

- www.ishared.life/19-crazy-sex-skills

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Yeah man great story there as got to be chapter 4+5

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Mo! Mo! and Mo,Mo!

Gots to bees Mo! Wanted ch 4 through 40!

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 6 years ago
Kind of saved from Ch 1 and 2

nice partial recovery. At a Rubicon for the story arc.

timrivtimrivalmost 6 years ago

Good start to a revenge cuck story where wife cheats get preggers and husband gets lethal revenge on her and her lovers. With hos 12 ga.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yuck.

Why not put your pathic cuck shit in interracial.

Zarek11Zarek11about 5 years ago
Continuation???

Oh man, I always have hoped there would be many more chapters to this story. Especially especially like the loving exchanges between husband and wife. And that the husband, though he's enjoying watching his wife getting fucked, isn't the stereotypical submissive wimp, like in so many other cuckold-stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

Did you fuck Baron? We need a recap of what happened while hubby was at work. She needs to meet Floyd, Baron, Reggie and more black cocks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You are welcome,

Bitch... now please don't come home ... ever.. for the last time... goodbye!

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Who

Who is this bloodthirsty killer Timriv? That's illegal man. Justified, certainly, but illegal.

michelledaniels1996michelledaniels1996over 2 years ago

You went to far. One man, respecting the husband but now she isn't his wife, divorce the bitch because obviously Floyd doesn't want her as his own, oassing her around. The art of the cuck is the wife still wanting and needing her husband unless he is just a sissy bitch and if he is, make him that way. Pretty horrible ending to an otherwise good start

rtistrtistover 2 years ago

another winning 5 star story

waiting for continuation w hubby discovering his femininity

and taking an active role

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

sequel? Julie needs to be bred and team fucked

CindyTVCindyTVabout 2 years ago

Loved this story. Great writing. Wish there was more...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story but I feel like you missed out on the opportunity to have these guys run a train on that married white whore. My wife's black boyfriend had a few guys come over with him one Saturday night and they took turns on my slutty wife all night long while I watched and tended bar. They all fucked her multiple times in every hole and left her exhausted and filled with come when they left early Sunday morning.

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