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thewolfooo1over 19 years agois english your first language
you need to read your story after you finish -- out loud-- hard to find anything erotic when it's mispelled and has other language flaws
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoyour grammar is terrible
What's wrong with this sentence?????
"The guy who had been sucked first could stand the erotic moment and grunted her was coming"
If you don't know....stop writing.
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