All Comments on 'Caught Masturbating'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not very good

Can do better.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 19 years ago
Great! I loved it!

I really enjoyed this! It's left me 'excited' and wanting more---please write more!

BoldgoBoldgoabout 19 years ago
Loved It

AS someone who loves the female orgasm as much as I do - you painted wonderful images, & "left the door open" for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
story sucked

this story was poorly written and lacked real life descriptions. It was tooooooooo much on the ordinary side

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
pervert

you sick perv you think by changeing the age no one would notice you where talking about someone under age

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oh man...

It was pretty good. You rush through some stuff, and for some reason you don't feel that her hair color, or any other details would be important, but I can look past that to enjoy the quality of the writing. Thank you.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 13 years ago
then it slowly dawns on you.....

i have never laughed so hard in my life on this one! thanks to you i spewed coke on the screen! Seriously, what to do when you have your hand in a place where it should and should not be?

Wave with the other?

Great, great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Pervert agreed

This sounds like a pervert spying on a little girl.. Even tho you said she is eighteen, you keep saying when she grows up.. She can buy her own porn if she's eighteen..

exquisitelifetimeexquisitelifetimeover 11 years ago
good start to the story

well done - give us more

Joshua94Joshua94almost 10 years ago
reply to everyone who says she seems underage

You guys have to note that in some states regardless of were this story took place put a 21 age limit on being able to purchase adult content....the author seems to hae allowed for this...in a way i dont think it makes her underage at all....in fact if she was why would her parents allow her to watch someone elses house?? Think beyond the sex guys and look at the other part of the story before jumping the gun.

to the Author---seemed rushed but well written otherwise.

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