Your story has a great line...it may be an old line but you seem to tell it right.....can't wait to hear the next installment .....
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Anonymous11/09/04
Consequences (or not)
Pretty well writen - BUT We hope you keep to your opening story premise - it gives this story some promise - otherwise it could be more of the same old tired line.
Beautiful written and your statement at the beginning tells it all. Will read the finale.
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Anonymous10/19/08
..whitebread loses again!!!
...ANOTHER whitebread's abused wife rescued by a BLACK STALLION!!!...ask VANNA WHITE...DOLLY PARTON...HEATHER TESCH...SAMANTHA BROWN...NANA VISITOR!!!...ALL are converted to be BLACK 'OWNED'...BREEDER VESSELS for the NEW BLACK america as soon as LORD OBAMA takes up residence in the newly renamed "BLACK HOUSE" with his BLACK FIRST LADY!!!...whitey...you's days is over...standby to be ruled into SLAVERY...we deserve it!!!...YOU GO GIRLS!!!XXXXXXXXXOXOXO...;-}}}...'da KING OBAMA RULE is almost here...an' yous' white honkeys is now 'gonna git' yers'...white women on BLACK STALLION PIPE LAYERS america..!!!
English
it's sounding good....
Your story has a great line...it may be an old line but you seem to tell it right.....can't wait to hear the next installment .....
Consequences (or not)
Pretty well writen - BUT We hope you keep to your opening story premise - it gives this story some promise - otherwise it could be more of the same old tired line.
Your choice
HOT....BUT
the sun sets in the west...
Great but twisted
Beautiful written and your statement at the beginning tells it all. Will read the finale.
..whitebread loses again!!!
...ANOTHER whitebread's abused wife rescued by a BLACK STALLION!!!...ask VANNA WHITE...DOLLY PARTON...HEATHER TESCH...SAMANTHA BROWN...NANA VISITOR!!!...ALL are converted to be BLACK 'OWNED'...BREEDER VESSELS for the NEW BLACK america as soon as LORD OBAMA takes up residence in the newly renamed "BLACK HOUSE" with his BLACK FIRST LADY!!!...whitey...you's days is over...standby to be ruled into SLAVERY...we deserve it!!!...YOU GO GIRLS!!!XXXXXXXXXOXOXO...;-}}}...'da KING OBAMA RULE is almost here...an' yous' white honkeys is now 'gonna git' yers'...white women on BLACK STALLION PIPE LAYERS america..!!!
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