All Comments on 'Gwen Becomes A Pissmop'

Good one.

would love to see a second part where that bitch gets a lot of scat over her full tits and face

A thousand dollars seems a little excessive to pay a slut. I would have done it for much less. She'll come back for more, so you can drop the price.

You'll win your bet then. She is coming back and for a cheaper fee.

now this is what I call a wet story ;-)

/busty_jessica

i'd drink yr piss for free! great read

This is the first of the pissmop stories that I read (and masturbated to). Great story.

-- Maria

I swear, every one of your piss stories is simply the best thing on the site. It drives me crazy. Even some of the stuff I personally think goes a little far, is just so inventive. Well done.

Every male loves a great revenge story, especially one in which he was shot down by the young, haughty bitch in high school. I'm left wondering how she came to such an ignominious fate....

This is nonsense. He hates her too much. The main character is pathetic - holding a grudge for that long, its too unbelievable for this to be good erotica. Work on your characters. At least you have good grammar though.