All Comments on 'Plunder Ch. 01'

Very strong and good first chapter! Excited to see what’s next!

I love this. I can’t wait until chapter two. I like that he didn’t automatically rape her. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Please follow this through

Excited to see where this goes!!!

Great story line. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!

Excellent writing and set up, I'm very excited to hear more.

Enjoyed it so far. Good description

Great writing

Liked this first introduction interested to see where it goes! Hope ch 2 is imminent x

Thanks so much for the feedback everyone! I am working on chapter 2 and it should be out in a week or so. I did a little research for this story, but I am by no means an expert on iron age Northern Europe, so if you notice any particularly glaring anachronisms feel free to let me know and I'll try to avoid them in future installments. Cheers!

What an exciting start. Can't wait to see where the story takes Avila. Please write chapter 2 soon!

Very fine writing in the creation of two simpatico characters in an interesting relationship. Look forward very much to what portends to be one very enjoyable story. Bravo.

Has been well over two months following your first intriguing chapter -- and, you saying the next would be coming in several weeks with no further word. Think can speak for others of your developing fan base that hope nothing untoward has happened. Looking forward to enjoying more great talent from you as a new writer to the site.

Historical romance are just good stories. They are interesting to read, just like this one. So please better release the next chapter. Thank you.

Back to see if there was another chapter yet. Sadly not. Can only assume after 8 months that something has occurred. Hope not catastrophic, and readers can again return to your work. All the best.

A good start, now waiting for more . . .