All Comments on 'Enlightenment's Trek'

Your writing is always a work of Art..

but your spelling mistakes really detract and often confuse your meaning. I recommend a dictionary and check any word you're not 100% sure of.

Otherwise, you're really improving.

I wanna go too..I loved this one Art..So where is the rest? Don't leave me in suspense. The imagery here is so right, tells and shows me everything..Thisrt, hunger, wanting it all.. Treking to have it..and yet somehow I think you aleready do..Great one~~!!!