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Charlotte & The Pirate Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Black Tulip11/25/04

Surely not?

Surely this cannot be the end of such a sweet romance?

Glad to see I can keep on reading the next chapters. LOL

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by txrosenaynay11/01/05

Ch.02

Excellent read...i will read on.

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by Anonymous04/23/14

Okay

I couldn't feel their chemistry. It was as if they were two strangers. You might want to go more in depth next time. But other than that, your vocabulary is good.

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