All Comments on 'Charlotte & The Pirate Ch. 02'

by mcfbridge

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Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
Surely not?

Surely this cannot be the end of such a sweet romance?

Glad to see I can keep on reading the next chapters. LOL

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
Ch.02

Excellent read...i will read on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Okay

I couldn't feel their chemistry. It was as if they were two strangers. You might want to go more in depth next time. But other than that, your vocabulary is good.

yukonnightsyukonnightsalmost 4 years ago

My thoughts on this part are ; It felt rushed. There was opportunity for a build up of tension, but it was missed. However, it may well be that there is a plan in all of this and it is certainly not a big issue.

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