All Comments on '"Unwrapping" Mommy'

Excellent as usual, Jasmine, you never let your fan's down.

Incredible Story !

...love seeing "silkstockingslover" as the author of any story. Thanks for another great one. Hope it really isn't "The End". More please.

A hot tale but you need to clean up after butt sex . You want to keep the other

two holes clean and tasting good.

Not my cup of tea.

LOL: "I was hoping for a new iPad,"

I am not usually one for the incest stories but this was so hot. I just wish you increased the length and included the sister fucking each of them. I am sure she was the truly Dominant one of the bunch. The Alpha

My only negative is the butt fuck of Devon.

I still gave you a 5, but loved Mommy and Amy action.

Will Shannon join later?

An excellent story, as always.

brilliant! so much potential for future playtimes!

I do not mind the Dad being bi because he was not the feature of the story, He was not important.

However, when his HOTT OLDER SISTER, Amy, planned to butt fuck her brother (the primary character) I dropped from 5 stars to 4 stars. This added some BSBD to the story for a future chapter.

Great story with the Mom and Son. Especially bringing in Shannon, his sexy GF, and their sexual activities was a plus to story.

Looking for a three-way with Mom and Amy and maybe even more adding Shannon.

I agree with Prop69. His mother had expressed an interest in his dominating her. She had given herself over to him as his submissive. Introducing a more dominant sister that wanted to fuck his ass throughs off the rhythm.

I can’t wait to see where we go from here. Perhaps an incestuous foursome where the kids dominate their parents and explore their sexuality with each other.

The story was going along being a decent read until it lost direction developing into that of kink by having any anal sex. So it should have been put in that listing of stories not this one.

Merry Christmas Jaz

Great piece, five stars from me * * * * *

I liked the plot, and the descriptive language is right up there. Very erotic tale, short and sweet, and with a nice turn. Potential for a sequel? Good luck in the contest,

Jack Auff

Whenever I see your name I know I am in for a great read. Thanks for another good one.

Another great story. Jasmine liked very much. Keep the son the Dominate Master of Mother and Sister. Would like the sons nylon fetish exploited more.

I wish there was more! Ended too soon.

I think this summed it up perfectly;

"Best Christmas ever," I moaned, as I participated in Mom's double penetration.

He must make them pregnant. Fantastic story and you must write part 2

You know you’re a good writer. I just wish the gay guy stuff was reserved for that genre and left out of the incest stories.

A really hot story, I liked the sister surprise at the end. I would love to see the sister dominant the whole family. A little incest mixed with a little femdom is very hot. This story has all kinds of possibilities for future chapters. Keep up the great writing.

BTW, why are they assuming Dad is an anal virgin? The evidence he's bi is Mom watching him suck cock while she was hidden in a closet. If he's kept that part hidden from them, there's a good chance he's keeping more from them. I mean, look at what Mom and Amy have kept from him.

definatly need to continue this store...daddy and gf added mmmm

Any chance the sister could smoke whilst fucking her brother, or her mom smoke whilst been eaten out?

Hot story, louts of kink and twisted tastes. You also included one of MY favorite kinks - when mom calls her son a "motherfucker", and MEANS it! That just trips my trigger every time.

How in the world can this be the end when the sister says"Oh it's just getting started"

need more chapters but clear everything up for Devon. he should learn all the true details and everyone submits to him.

I agree there has 2 be more was the sister there all along

As always, another wonderful story that as a mom myself can fantasize about as if I was her. Love your writing, don't ever stop!

Hey dear I definitely want another Part of this amazing tale I would definitely love Amy being destroyed by her brother as a slut and I as fan of your work has a demand keep em coming I love as the biggest writer on lit

You really need to continue or finish this, great job as always.

This is what holidays are for ... family.

You really need to continue this story. I want to hear all about the sex adventures of mother, father, daughter, brother, and the girlfriend.

Hi all,

First thanks for the positive comments.

Second I wrote this as a quick stroke story with little intention for more parts originally.

Third the plot twist at the end of who wrapped Mommy was a very last minute plot idea that I thought was wickedly fun... as was the revelations that followed (originally it was simply a mistaken identity stroke story).

Fourth the bi angle was to mKe this story a bit different from the usual mom son stories and the oblivious dad...

In conclusion... not sure where I would take this if it was continued... so if interested please let me k is what plot you would like to see.

Jasmine 2017

Great story line. Liked the various twist. Hope there is another chapter. XXOO

Oh my god Jasmine, more and more of this please and soon, like yesterday. So fucking sucking hot and depraved and totally outrageous. Cock crazed cunts for sucking and fucking 24/7, absolutely love it. I adore cunt and cunt juice, love to get pissed up on cunt juice. Love eating cunt while fucking cunt, would love to be with these two sex crazed cock lovers, and anymore cunts they invite to join in.would just love to be up to my tonsils and balls in you Jasmine, sucking and fucking you to heaven every day.

Cunt lapping sex maniac Lancashire, UK

This is incredible. I love the idea of the Dad getting involved. But the mom stuff is amazing. PLEASE keep going.

Love this story and it should definitely continue. Maybe the "Twelve Days Of Christmas"? Maybe Mom or Dad have sisters or brothers? Maybe those sisters & brothers have sons or daughters and they have Christmas traditions like this?

They might have to rent a big house in the mountains for Christmas, or it could be they'd like to rent a big house at some beach?

All kinds of possibilities.

W.

You're right. This was a quick stroke. Wasn't expecting the sister/daughter at the end. Nice twist. Gave it five stars.

this is a holiday contest story and given all your fans, me inlcluded, love your writing and vote 5s and yet you get the lower than deserved score, still HOT!, I can see BurntRedstone has targeted you with his cheaty ways. Fuck him. BurntRedstone should be kicked off this site!!!!!!!!!!!

Love your work, Silk. Always that twist or 5 somewhere.. hott. just like you.

Cetan

my dear please continue the story as Devon being the master of all of em and others being his slut's even his dad or his girl friends dad can get ass fucked from him and his girl friend or his sister his soon to be inlaws can be his bitches and specially Devon's aunt from his dad's side can be his slave or his mommy's slave I am suggesting this because it I'll be completely new thing from your side because I red all of your mom son stories none of them had these (dad being slut inalws being slut's or dad's sis being dominated by son or mom ) so what do you think about my ideas please tell me my email id is farooqhussaintoor@gmail.com

Unwrapping mothers nylons, I understood immediately the crisis of mommy's need to wear our sensuous outfits whilst united trans penis/vagina. Mommy again damp between our plush pantyhose felt the slick confines of nylon and spandex . Mother insisted.... "Mommy is ready" she squealed. Driving my nylon encased member into Mommy, she swooned as I looked deeply into Mommy's eyes with abandoned love. "All preparations underway"? Mother, a willing and devoted hot needy bitch, took much pleasure stroking and smoothing her pantyhose,(open). Family member licked, lunged, and together loved the mother attuned to carnal pleasures of the incestuous.

Great story. I hope more is on the way and I hope you win. :)

Its a wonderful story but I was wondering what happens next. Did the father finally come to terms with his new surprising family when he finally finds out about it?

I have always looked for your stories, this is the first one i have ever commented on. Love the idea of pegging i havent been able to find one, this had my intrest once i saw the part of the strap on.... Please please please continue this one i now have to know

Another great Christmas story from my favorite writer. Would love to read more of this story and all your at her truly great stories. Keep up the great work Jasime

Hope to read more about this family.

Can't wait to hear how he fills his slut sisters cunt

Maybe i missed it but whats gonna happen wjth his girlfriend

Jasmine, your the best. Another great story and I hope it will be continued soon. We, your fans, need to find out how everything roles together with this family.

Another fantastic story Jasmine, hope to read more soon. Your simply the best.

What a wicked imagination! 5*

"...not sure where I would take this if it was continued."

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If it was continued? Everything about Shannon would seem to indicate bringing her into the mix, making it a foursome.

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Speaking of Shannon, you wrote that his mom "was teaching my current girlfriend Advanced Calculus." Wouldn't that be Shannon? The reason I ask is because that would imply she lives in the same town, yet her parents live three hours away. If you do continue I guess the easy fix is that the school is college and not high school, which was my assumption.

I usually enjoy just about all of your works, even with the overabundance of focus on nylons & stockings (I enjoy them as much as any man, and I get that it's pretty much your m.o.), however, this one was quite a let down. For one, the son was WAAAAAAAY too timid after the Mom revealed that she knew it was him and was meant to be his gift. Then, when he finally did snap out of it to take charge, he took teasing her WAAAAAAY too far, and he didn't really do it in any type of sensual way. Seriously, who the heck opts to play "20 Questions" when faced with the long-awaited fantasy of fucking their hot Mom.

Also, speaking as a straight man, nothing kills an erection faster than I the whole "son fucking Dad" hints you sprinkled throughout the scene, instead of focusing on Mom & Son finally coming together (pun intended) and both achieving their long held desires. If you're going to include such things, at least give your readers a heads up before the start of the story. And with the sister popping up and butting in (again pun intended) to the Mom & Son's special moment, it just flat out took away from the whole romanticism of the story, and just caused it to feel like a flat, half-hearted and rushed effort to push out a story before the holiday.

Just my two cents, hope I didn't offend.

Good, but having Amy show up without any previous mention of her is sloppy.

I know it was good because I couldn't finish the story in one go! Good job!

Awesome! There are so many directions to go with this story line. The Christmas tradition angle is great and can certainly be built upon. Having dad and Shannon added to the mix would be great. Another angle would be to have him dominate Amy eventually as well. This would round out his love of submissive women whom Amy would turn into once she samples bothers big cock.

Thank you. This is another great read.

I would love to see more of this story. Definitely want to know more of the Mother/Father/Daughter back story, had to double check your stories to make sure this wasn't a follow up to a previous Mom Daughter story. Also interested to see how sibling rivalry plays out in regards to who's Dom/Sub, as well as the other characters (Mom, Dad & GF).

I got a kick out of this story. Couldn't stop reading until the end, which came too soon.

Great story! I hope you continue this story as it is a wonderful beginning! I can foresee a lot of action to be had by all!!

This was way hot, except I would prefer loving sex to dom/sub stuff. Dad is really missing out. Good job with this girl.

I totally loved your story, even though it reminds me more of a young guys fantasy than anything thar could ever happen in real life. Syill, it is a worthy submission

Bring on another Merry Christmas! My kind of holiday tail (sic)!

You can't start a story like that and not continue it ;-)

Brilliant as usual!!

I enjoyed it immensely! You're an excellent writer and your thoughts and mind are very deep.

This was a great story, loved the reminiscing of the son stroking his cock all those years thinking of Mom in her thigh highs and dreaming of the day he’d fuck her, thinking it would never happen. I would have like it better if the sister would have walked in at the very end after the son finished fucking his mom’s pussy. But a great story nonetheless.

You have a glorious imagination, an imagination that definitely needs to be put to a continuation.

I will add my voice to the many concerning the excellent writing for this story. I love your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Make incest an art, my fav is mom and son only, why share mom with anyone. THANKS

I every time read one of your stories I get a hard on and pound out a great one. Thank you

Your story was ok until U fucked it up with D gay shit

Love your stories. Would love to read part 2/more of this story line.

Great story til the end. Why is every one mixing incest with gay/lesbian sex. What a turn off.

I don't like the gay/lesbo crap either. I was beginning to wonder is sonny boy knew what a pussy was for...

I saw some reader comments from this year (2020), then found yours from Nov 2017, asking for input. So, it's probably too late to be meaningful, but some of the recent misogynist stuff made me want to write in your quasi-defence. Have loved your stories a long time, you do dominant mother-daughter scenes like no one else. Where to go with this particular story? I say, write what you want, what turns you on. But, I personally would like it if Dad doesn't become a sissy. It does mess up my stroke. ;-) Now, Daughter could peg him while he ass-fucks Mom (while Son fucks her throat again) and he should also flip daughter over to give some ass-loving in return. Don't need the Dad-sucks-Son stuff to make me happy; maybe they can just high-five while Dad fucks Sis alongside Son fucking Mom? Can't help being hetero-male. :-)

It was great. And as a lesbian, I appreciated the mix. I hate how they're complaining about gay stuff being mixed with incest as if it shouldn't matter whether it's there or not. Str8 guys will be fine watching two women get it on but then something they don't like to do like being with a guy kills their vibe. The writer writes what they feel, period and for fucks sake it wasn't made for you alone dammit. I liked it, definitely got me 2 cum so thank u!

Some kid wrote it

I absolutely love reading your work. Please keep it up as your stories certainly keep me up. I've had many climatic nights reading your work. Thanks again.

Oh, my. Sexy as heck and sensual as heck and so much left for a reader to carry on with. Lovely.

I really loved your story

Is there more to this I feel you could or should write in the rest keep it going

Thanks

Robin

Great story, as usual. Love your work. I’m working on my own mother/son incest story so it will be a great help, thank you.

Toto. We're not in Kansas anymore!

Now that’s what I like-short and hot-and to the point.

HOLY FUCK! You drive me insane with lust. If you are even one tenth as sensual and sexual as you write then I am in awe of your greatness.

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Hawt und Zexxi!

11/10 Wrapped Mommies!!!!!

Would have been nice to read about them all making dad their personal slut

Great short story but it ended too soon. I would love to see the son fuck his sister hard as well.

The dad is always gay, bi or a cuck lol.

Next time dad left mom so simp son like this guy can get some is better.

The author asked for feedback and they got it. Not everyone likes man on man sex. F on F or F bi is more permissible to men. If you don't want to hear opinions that don't agree with you you should stay off the internet or stop reading comments.

I didn't like the disrespect of the mother even if it is just a fantasy nor did I like the anal sex that part was gross as fuck and if you do ever decide to write another chapter please leave the gay sex out of it only people who are gay or bi would like that at the same time there the only ones who would even have a fantasy and or mention it in a story that would kill a story quicker than damn anything like when you said the son got a blow job from another man and he liked it shit that about made me throw up

To person who says there a lesbian and hates how people hate the gay sex between to guys but not women well it's pretty simple if you are truly a lesbian you don't like sex with guys well it's the same with us who are straight we don't like sex with guys cause that shit is sick as hell and has no place in the world in my opinion however we like it when 2 women are having sex cause we are thinking of ways to join in and turn the women straight

I would love to see more of this story, though I don't have any interest in the MM sex. This should have continued with the sister getting fucked as well. I found it strange that Mom used the dad's name Ben at first when she knew it wasn't him.

I LOVE perverted, incestuous, HOT, deviant sex. And this story has plenty of that. I'd only hope that this one has more chapters, as I'd love to find out where and how dad fits in, or gets fit into.

If dad is bi he would like to fuck his wife and maybe his daughter. All three of them can give him anal and he can blow is son. Chapter 2?

Awesome story. Ch 2 is needed where Devon fucks his sister, maybe while she is fucking their mom. I also want to see a scene where he is fucking his gf (Shannon?) and she is begging him to be his full-time slut. Maybe she joins the threesome with his mom and sister. But i really want to see Devon dominate his sister.

Next chapter

I would like to read a chapter where Ben finds out what is going on, joins in the fun and learns who to eat her out properly.