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imp,
Good!
Loved it
'a ship on the ocean, your anchor cast upon the rocky shore.'
thank you, imp, for sharing those feelings in such an eloquent manner.
great job!
*hugs*
v~
Stunning
I'm a sucker, firstly for portrayals of deep emotions, secondly for expressive language and extensive use of vocabulary, and thirdly, writing that combines those two and leaves me speechless with admiration.
You got me, hook, line and sinker. Mat
nice effort
Sometimes the simplest parts leap out at me. The passage that connects with where I am at the most right now is this:
"while I did not
choose
to love you, I would not now
change"
Great Stuff
I really liked this - I loved the structure, imagery and emotion - well done!
And it is
I know you where you are coming from with this poem...I love it - it's like you are in my head.
Great job!!
Honey
Very nice
I enjoyed this one, impressive; very nice imagery. The line breaking was a bit disruptive to me- it seemed to halt the flow of a very liquid poem.
Impressive indead~
a poetic icon and very inspirational,
a witty and clever poet with a very
good flare for hitting the heart string
painting two beautiful pictures with
one poem~
Art~
*sigh*
Very stirring poem, having achieved the very difficult task of being applicable to a great many situations. I loved it.
~lucky
Amazing
when with wonder we
dive
into the tranquil depths of our future
I think this is the third poem of yours that I've read and they all have kick ass endings. And beginnings and middles and everything else.
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