All Comments on 'Free Use Farm - October'

by Chancily

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Missing a story

Uhm...WAAAAYYYY TOO SHORT. This story has so many potential directions it could go! This could easily be a 4-5 page story. Keep at it

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it -

hot, short and intriguing

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

not to shoot - leaves room for follow-ups.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Fun

The earlier anonymous comments are correct. It got me up, now get writing . Keep it up.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Awesome..what a fantastic short story

Wish I knew how to find the farm.

What a dream.

How about Chapter 2?

vrieseavrieseaover 6 years ago
Got my attention

You definitely have my attention, now your next chapters are going to make or brake this story. - Vriesea

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it.

I'd love to read more. Five stars.

mbrattoombrattooover 6 years ago

This is super hot. I'd love to see more!

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
I think we are missing the story

Do we get to read January - September?

This was so short it's like October was only one week long this year.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love your story

Hope theres another one real soon

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Masterfully crafted

Short with no distractions. A wonderful story.

ynoterynoterover 6 years ago
Thank you

Great to the point and a fantasy lived out....

ChancilyChancilyover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you all for your comments!

A new one is coming soon!

And I just wanted to address the comment about Jan-Sept. This one--October--is the first in the series.

topleaseustopleaseusover 6 years ago
NICE!

"Hmm. Sounded like permission to fuck his wife to me!"

HAHAHA! Fantastic! Love it man! Good shit! On to the next two. \m/

NutsterNutster8 months ago

This clearly needs a part 2 (probably 3, or more).

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