by Chancily
Uhm...WAAAAYYYY TOO SHORT. This story has so many potential directions it could go! This could easily be a 4-5 page story. Keep at it
The earlier anonymous comments are correct. It got me up, now get writing . Keep it up.
Wish I knew how to find the farm.
What a dream.
How about Chapter 2?
You definitely have my attention, now your next chapters are going to make or brake this story. - Vriesea
Do we get to read January - September?
This was so short it's like October was only one week long this year.
A new one is coming soon!
And I just wanted to address the comment about Jan-Sept. This one--October--is the first in the series.
"Hmm. Sounded like permission to fuck his wife to me!"
HAHAHA! Fantastic! Love it man! Good shit! On to the next two. \m/