by DeadSince2001
Very nice. Please keep the story going. I like the more serious nature of the plot. My only complaint is the short chapter.
I just read your series it is a fantastic story I hope you continue to write.
Are you really going to leave us readers wondering about his plans for her?
Surprise, surprise, another dead story on Literotica. I really wish authors would publish their stories all at once start to finish rather than little bits and pieces at a time which usually result in stores never getting finished or taking years before it’s finished.
Pretty sad you have deteriorated from the original submission to poor and poorer, I give up as you must be fading fast in boring material trying to make up what would be exciting material - wrong, simply pathetic, no further chapters as you can't make one read crap. This was supposed to be a more experienced guy and he acts jr high in this story. give it up no mas, no mas.....