All Comments on 'The Observer'

Too short! A good beginning- give us more!!

I had planned a longer version, but other stories have taken precedence (including THREE extensive re-writes of one that still needs work).

I have a continuation in my mind. Just need to find the time to get it done.

Okay, it's been more than a year and this story has dropped away, but we fans NEED you to write another,.. please, with sweetener on it?,,, would ya? could ya? yeah you should!

and maybe some of the transformed/feminized babes could be transgendered?

I am sorry not to have posted anything for a while. I have health issues that make it difficult to sit at a keyboard for very long at a time. I have posted so work under a different user name. if you are interested the name is 60YONovice.