All Comments on 'Sweet Stella'

I really enjoyed your writing and the pictures you are able to paint with words.

May I make just one suggestion. I much prefer, when reading a story, for it to be in past tense - as it is about something that has happened,

Perhaps just personal preference. Anyway, please keep up the excellent wotk

Spoiled by the crap of the condom he should have just pushed is cock in and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

I felt like they were living the roles...rather than being manipulated by the author.

Bravo, You!

I rejoice when a story like this lets me enjoy

nice people sharing with each other.

Thanks for such a kind comment yourself! And I'm happy you liked these two people - I felt they deserved to be happy with each other.... I know it's fiction, but still, I think some realism makes it more affective

Great story really felt I was there in either role. She has a big brother just as I imagined. Thanks for adding the condom it made it more life like. Can't wait for the next dtory

Proper writing; so evocative, so atmospheric, and - unusually for this website - so erotic.

I'm off to read some more of your stuff.

You just keep doing it. PLEASE don't stop.

And the condom was well done and proper, ignore the anon. moron who does not give a shit about the damage in his trail. A good story is so close to reality that it matters. And them not realizing giving him her Virginity would bleed was spot on.

I just read your story, “The Neapolitan Question” (three times - so good) and I thought I would try more of your stories.

I was hoping, but not expecting, anything as good. This may not pull my heart strings to the same degree (it is a shorter story) but the writing flows, the dialogue is real, and I loved the details of your characters.

Thank you for a wonderful couple stories. You are a gift to this website . . . I’m off to read more. 🙂

You are so good Sara it is a joy to read you a second time.

Just a beautiful, wonderfully-written story.

You write beautifully, the story is great, and the sex is well worth waiting for! I also really appreciate the way you treat difference in general and racial differences in particular as something normal - and celebrate the differences!

Sweet story. He’s very caring

Right in your element!

Feels like I'm in the room...with people I really like!

Especially The Author! :+))

Sara,

Strong and true to form. I think I really groove on the way you subtly build milieu, and the way your characters aren't perfect anything; in fact there are none of the common measurements or superlatives. I am enchanted by the fact that these are two mixed-race people; but even that label is wrong. They are just two working people of the sort that populates London and the world now. A more randy Zadie Smith.

Hey, haven't seen much from you lately. Hopefully, this means you are working on a book that is being published to prospects of fame and fortune. Well, TTFN