Never read any of these stories before, but I am sure I will be now. Always seen 'em on the site, but never got into them. Incredibly well thought out. Bravo.
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Anonymous11/11/04
Another great story!
Your storys are great! I only wish mom would get pregnant!
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Anonymous11/11/04
False Start
It is not a good idea for the first word of a story to be wrong. Suggest you learn the difference between "your" -meaning belonging to you and "You're" which is the abbreviation of "You are"
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Anonymous11/11/04
Thank god for "False Start"
You know, your chapters all would've deserved 100's if it weren't for your terrible spelling. As it was, I still gave you 75's...
Don't worry about spelling, just keep them comming
Don't worry about spelling, just keep them coming. This story as has become the norm from you was a masterpiece of plot and story. So don't worry about the spelling issues. If a reader can't get past the smallest of details and just enjoy the story for the content and not worry about symantics, then let them look elsewhere for entertainment. Granted, positive feedback is always good as is CONSTRUCTIVE negative, But still I enjoyed the story for the entertainment value of the piece which scores a solid 100 in my book. GOOD JOB....... and keep them coming.
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Anonymous11/30/04
don't worry
The guy that was making fun of your spelling doesn't even know how to say correct English "weren't" should be "wasn't". Keep it up.
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Anonymous12/04/04
Rock ON
Loving the story.. and no worries bout the spellin.. if'n peeps can't figure out what ya mean then it is thier own lose... keep em coming me and my sister love em
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Anonymous12/04/04
Do worry
or, better stated, be concerned about your spelling and the mechanics of your writing. It makes the difference often between passable and good.
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Anonymous08/04/05
loved every word please dont stop .
the best erotic work I've read in a long time dont let negetive comments stop the creative juices from flowing
I look forward to more of your work in the future.
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Anonymous08/11/05
awsome
it's the best stroy i have read on hear in a long time please keep wrighting more of them A Boy In Babeland is awsome i want more chapters if you get around to wrighting them .
your stories rocks but only i have a little disagreement if lle gonna get all the sisters pregnant why dont start with april
continue your great work you r a natural writter not only erotica style
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Anonymous09/18/06
Uh...
A brother got his sister pregnant? Not right.
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Anonymous10/12/06
Nice story, bad writing.
Grammar and spelling can ruin a story by making it too confusing for the reader sometimes. Phrases such as, "...the shock was showing on all Kim's sisters too and Lee faces." completely baffled me. How can that even make sense to you as you write the piece?
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Anonymous02/25/08
Can't beat it!
Getting Stacey pregnant too? That's hot! Way to describe their intercourse and how Stacey so wanted his baby (of course, it's definitely fiction how all of the sisters weren't already pregnant).
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Anonymous07/03/08
back home
good but lee and april should move back home so they can quit their jobs and go back to taking care of the house and the up coming babies they could live in lee's room and it would be off limits to everyone else except by invitation
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Anonymous07/20/08
Superb! As Always!
How about a few 69s for us "freaks"? Do whatever you want, just keep it coming!
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Anonymous06/06/10
sorry man but the whole making everyone pregnant just ruined the story for me man it was great until then imean having a 8 toed kid walking around and i bet by the end of the series all of them are gonna be knocked up and man they just moved in how is he gonna pay for all them kids
the story was a 5 out of 5 before the pregnancies now its a 2 out of 5
It sounds to me like Stace was a little envious of Kim even tho she was still happy for her over all it was a very good twist
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Anonymous04/22/12
incest babies dont work like that
To the anonymous that said the baby would come out with some fucked up thing about it....incest doesn't work like that you retard. In order for a baby of incest to come out like that it must go through a few if not more generations of incest. Well either that OR just like everyone elses baby just by sheer bad luck it can come out dis figured.
English
YOU HAVE TO LOVE THIS STORY
Glad to see the new ch. of this HOT story
Wow...
Thats about all I can say. Wow.
Never read any of these stories before, but I am sure I will be now. Always seen 'em on the site, but never got into them. Incredibly well thought out. Bravo.
Another great story!
Your storys are great! I only wish mom would get pregnant!
False Start
It is not a good idea for the first word of a story to be wrong. Suggest you learn the difference between "your" -meaning belonging to you and "You're" which is the abbreviation of "You are"
Thank god for "False Start"
You know, your chapters all would've deserved 100's if it weren't for your terrible spelling. As it was, I still gave you 75's...
Don't worry about spelling, just keep them comming
Don't worry about spelling, just keep them coming. This story as has become the norm from you was a masterpiece of plot and story. So don't worry about the spelling issues. If a reader can't get past the smallest of details and just enjoy the story for the content and not worry about symantics, then let them look elsewhere for entertainment. Granted, positive feedback is always good as is CONSTRUCTIVE negative, But still I enjoyed the story for the entertainment value of the piece which scores a solid 100 in my book. GOOD JOB....... and keep them coming.
don't worry
The guy that was making fun of your spelling doesn't even know how to say correct English "weren't" should be "wasn't". Keep it up.
Rock ON
Loving the story.. and no worries bout the spellin.. if'n peeps can't figure out what ya mean then it is thier own lose... keep em coming me and my sister love em
Do worry
or, better stated, be concerned about your spelling and the mechanics of your writing. It makes the difference often between passable and good.
loved every word please dont stop .
the best erotic work I've read in a long time dont let negetive comments stop the creative juices from flowing
I look forward to more of your work in the future.
awsome
it's the best stroy i have read on hear in a long time please keep wrighting more of them A Boy In Babeland is awsome i want more chapters if you get around to wrighting them .
and april???
your stories rocks but only i have a little disagreement if lle gonna get all the sisters pregnant why dont start with april
continue your great work you r a natural writter not only erotica style
Uh...
A brother got his sister pregnant? Not right.
Nice story, bad writing.
Grammar and spelling can ruin a story by making it too confusing for the reader sometimes. Phrases such as, "...the shock was showing on all Kim's sisters too and Lee faces." completely baffled me. How can that even make sense to you as you write the piece?
Can't beat it!
Getting Stacey pregnant too? That's hot! Way to describe their intercourse and how Stacey so wanted his baby (of course, it's definitely fiction how all of the sisters weren't already pregnant).
back home
good but lee and april should move back home so they can quit their jobs and go back to taking care of the house and the up coming babies they could live in lee's room and it would be off limits to everyone else except by invitation
Superb! As Always!
How about a few 69s for us "freaks"? Do whatever you want, just keep it coming!
sorry man but the whole making everyone pregnant just ruined the story for me man it was great until then imean having a 8 toed kid walking around and i bet by the end of the series all of them are gonna be knocked up and man they just moved in how is he gonna pay for all them kids
the story was a 5 out of 5 before the pregnancies now its a 2 out of 5
A good twist
It sounds to me like Stace was a little envious of Kim even tho she was still happy for her over all it was a very good twist
incest babies dont work like that
To the anonymous that said the baby would come out with some fucked up thing about it....incest doesn't work like that you retard. In order for a baby of incest to come out like that it must go through a few if not more generations of incest. Well either that OR just like everyone elses baby just by sheer bad luck it can come out dis figured.
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