A Beginning

great story

perhaps you should put a little disclaimer at the beginning that the girl is 18, just to ward off these idiots?
anyone with half an imagination can draw their own conclusions as u allude to small hands, bald pussy, etc. Plenty of stories talk about an '18' year old girl, then go on to discuss her teddies, playing with dolls, baby talk, etc. Keeps yourself safe.

great story - just maybe develop the next one a little more. longer is better

Brings back memories

This story brings back memories of the first time I enjoyed my little girls pussy. Best I ever had

A Good Beginning

Nice story. For a first effort, it shows a lot of promise. In the future, however, you should be sure that you make it clear that everyone in your stories is 18 or older. This will help to weed out all of the pedofiles, and keep you from possibly being labeled as one yourself. As I said, though, it was a good start, especially if there is a chance that this could become a series. Also, you may want to consider adding a little more detail. It can often add to the reader's enjoyment, and leaves less open to interpretation. Check out a few stories by Wm Sexspear to see what I mean. He is an excellent writer, and serves as a great example of everything a writer should bring to a story.

Great Story!

Interesting that the comment titled "small hands, big cock", by Anonymouse on 8/24/06 says that her father is in jail for molesting her... but here she is reading incest porn... she must hate looking in the mirror! LOL

Great story, well written - hope to read more of this fantasy soon. Ignore the self-rightous comments about age - those people are simply morons.

MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I loved it!!! I want to be a Daddy's little girl again. The awe and discovery...the love...the specialness and closeness of having secrets. We only gave each other pleasure...I was never hurt or traumatized in any way. I still feel special because my Daddy loved me that way.

Juicy

I'm so fucking horny right now. I have been planning to fuck my uncle soon. He has been lusting after me for years, so I am going to give him the night of his life.

ita was great

great story, I'm horny

Wonderful story

I loved the story and I loved that the author left age to the imagination.

I never had this experience with my Daddy, but when I fantasize about it, the younger the better it would have been.

I wish there were more to this story to read this very moment. So hot.

Loved it

Made me cum

good start

good story but I would like to know the ages most especially the daughter.

Awsome story

I really liked your story...please write more!

great story

I cant wait to read the next part

mmmm throbbing clit

mmm, how hot! totally love the idea of daddy guiding daughter into her unknown and showing her the way. sensual, sexy, nuturing, gorgeous.

The story was written in 2004.
There were no continuation.
Wish that there were continuation.
Thank you to the author.

Keep writing

It's good, but the girl seems a little bit too naïve!!!

Loved it!!!!

Your story is quite possibly my favorite on the site. Please, please continue to write. Thanks for your wonderful submission.

perfect!

please continue on with this, really great story!

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A very good story that captures the reader.

But.......

You really needed an editor for this one. You had sentences that ran on and over what was necessary. You had comma after comma after comma after comma. It was really hard to discern where things began and where things ended.

This one was amazing! How young was that girl though? Like 10? And yet the younger she is the sexier it seems.

wow

this is a good story but in my mind i couldnt help but to picture the girl about 7 or 8

Loved it!

I agree, this girl seemed young in her inquiries. I like it very much. Made me hot imagining as it evolved. Is there more to come of these two?

seemed like a little kid

it sounded like a young child.................

I absolutely love it!

I love that you left the ages out but why stop there? More please. I am hooked;)There is nothing better than sweet daddy love.

Wow!

More, more of this Father/Daughter pairing.

HOT

OMG that was hot

wow hot...what happens next...

Great start

Wow what a great start I hope you continue to write more about Julie learning all about sex with her Daddy i really like your writing style and love your imagination please keep it up because it sure got my cock hard