put full panties on daughter in next part to spice things up a little
by
Anonymous11/10/04
A Beautiful Innocent Story
This story doesn't need any "spicing up" - just keep it going along the same theme - innocent accidental discovery. Leaving ages out makes it hard to visualise the degree of innocence and how far the "relationship" can go.
Please keep this as an innocent story of developing love and enlightenment between a father and daughter. Certainly such a deep relationship would be rare in today's self-righteous moralistic society. However, it is a still a fantasy story!
by
Anonymous11/10/04
Carry on!
I hope this really is just a beginning - and that he gets it in her, soon!
Lukas
by
Anonymous11/10/04
Sexy!!!!! Hot!!!!
Loved your story. Please continue it soon. I loved that you didn't mention an age for the daughter. Leaves it to the imagination of the reader. Thanks for a HOT HOT story. I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait for the rest of the story.
i try realy i do to not slam stories so i wont here just please make the next part more realistic .let her "grow" up please. "jakk"
by
Anonymous11/11/04
Sweet and Slow
A daughter's first time w her daddy should be slow and sensual, full of the love and nervous energy that comes with the discovery sexual feelings. Think back to those first times and let your characters continue to develop the heat. Looking forward to more from you. My favorite fantasy. Her innocence can allude to the illegal for those that enjoy it or legality for those offended by younger experiences. Good technique
by
Anonymous11/13/04
Fully Charged
You brought back fond memories from my own past .
Thank you .
by
Anonymous02/25/05
endorsement
The best ass when they're eleven, and get better as time goes one!
by
Anonymous05/22/05
Fab story!
Please keep going you are a really good writer!The whole innocence is just too yummy! The age thing does help but isnt need to to make it a great story.
by
Anonymous06/09/05
Wow
It's stories like this that make you feel bad for liking them. So, I must feel like Satan himself right now. Please finish it!
by
Anonymous08/04/05
wow!!
what a great story,a real turn on. it takes me back to my very first time with my dad. i was very young back then and he was a good teacher, i will love him forever !
by
Anonymous08/29/05
golly!
i love the story my dad had me the same way. i guess he has her to in the story .my dad was so kind to me and it didnt hurt to much, the first time'
by
Anonymous08/31/05
mmmmm
this was beautiful and hot and felt so true. thank you for writing about the most perfect relationship a girl can have
by
Anonymous11/06/05
Great
A beautiful beginning that happens more often than you think. Keep it up. Another chapter soon please.
by
Anonymous11/07/05
Really sweet !
Fantastic story ! Hope there is more :)
by
11/07/05
Very nicely
written and a caring encounter.
by
Anonymous11/17/05
waiting
for the next installment!
by
Anonymous11/23/05
More...........please?
a sweet innocent desire.......beautifully written
by
Anonymous12/24/05
WOW
Defenitly a good storybut too short
by
Anonymous02/13/06
best story on the site
This is by far the best story on this site. Please write more like this... Love the young character!
by
Anonymous03/12/06
love the story
But would like to hear more, much much more!
by
Anonymous04/15/06
Hmm...
I loved the story but u need to hurry and finish it.. i'd love to know how it ends.
by
Anonymous04/27/06
We need more
This is really hot but I did get to wondering how old the girl is. Is she jail bait or not?
by
Anonymous05/24/06
loving father
Great!!! My imagination is running wild!! I can hardly wait for more!
by
Anonymous06/05/06
take it slow
build up her passion for her dad n teach her right. start out licking her n go from there
by
Anonymous07/09/06
love the innocence
of julie and dad teaching her how to masturbate him is mindblowing
by
Anonymous07/09/06
Young Pussy, i love it
I love the young & inocent, virgin pussy is the best.
by
Anonymous07/11/06
please sir, can I have some more
I need to know what happens next, what does daddy teach his little girl?
by
Anonymous07/20/06
Did not go far enough.
Father eating her also would have been much better,
by
Anonymous07/21/06
Lick her Pussy Dad !
Great Start,Now you need to lick her Pussy and Slip a Finger into her Bum Hole.............Bobby
by
Anonymous07/30/06
Great !!!
Love stories of dads fucking virgin daughters...can't wait for more
by
Anonymous08/24/06
small hands, big cock
small hands and a big cock can only mean one thing: your "daughter" is too young! keep it a secret! that's sexual child abuse and it should be against the law to write filth like that! shame on you! my dad did that to me and now he's serving time, you should be too!
by
Anonymous09/15/06
sick bloody sick
this is a sick story the lasy seems to be young and that makes this story very very sick i did not like it and will not read eny mor e of your story.
annonimus
by
Anonymous09/23/06
Note about other posts
People this is Incest\Taboo, not the Lawful\consentual forum. I haven't read this piece yet, but judging by the first couple of negative posts, it's interesting to note how they can be so lawful and uptight! There is an issue about too young and I understand that, but they should take a look at the title of the forum. I might not like it, but I will still read and see for myself.
by
Anonymous10/11/06
HOT! HOT! HOTTER!!!!
MY DAD AND I ARE LOVERS WE READ IT TOGETHER AND HE SAID AFTER I FINISH WITH MY COMMENT TO YOU HES GOING TO TAKE ME TO BED. WE REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY LINE CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART
C'mon stuff like this is,or should be against the law. We have no idea of the age of the gal but from her conversation and size of her hands we have to assume she is very young.
by
Anonymous10/21/06
Interesting ... in more ways than one.
Ya gotta love these clowns who come on here to read porn but are all offended because it's not the kind of porn THEY like. I thought this stuff was all fantasy, not actual life experiences. As such, anything goes. If you don't like the topic, read something else. But don't try to tell us what we can read.
by
Anonymous10/27/06
IN Loving Memory
That's about how it happened with my dad, he is gone now but thank you for awakening a wonderful memory.
by
Anonymous11/23/06
Great Story
Just wanted to say I loved your story even though the girls age was not told. I still loved it. It brought back old memories and made my cock hard as a rock. Hope to read more soon.
As for the rude comments from others don't let it bother you they are jerks.
Big Al
by
Anonymous11/26/06
Great sex story
I wish if ican fuck my daughter like this
by
Anonymous12/17/06
I remember
My dad had me like that. many years ago now and people should know that no matter how young a girl or boy for that matter they all know something about sex and what things are for I know I did. I love the story and thanks for the reminder.
by
Anonymous02/10/07
Great Story !
This story reminded me so much of me and my daughters experience as she was growing up. It was a very loving relationship enjoyed by my daughter as much as by myself. Thanks for the memories~~
by
Anonymous03/31/07
Brings back memories!!!
Please take us farther into you secrets. It sure brings back memories of my first taste of my youngest daughter!
by
Anonymous06/04/07
Not as creepy as the comments!
Ok, so the story did push a little far on the age thing. Small hands, bald pussy, baby talk, keep it our little secret, and then the explaination about the cum .."how mommy and I made you!" Daddy daughter stories are my favorite..never had the experience myself, but for some reason I dig it, but this..did not really imply consent, it felt more like trickery, taking advantage, and yes..abuse.
However..this is a VERY common fantasy (as a phone sex operator, I get plenty of requests for it), and the way I figure it, if someone is dealing with a taboo fantasy and it turns them on to read/talk about it, why not? I would rather have someone jerk off while reading a story like this (or talking to me or one of my colleagues) than have them repress it until they don't know what else to do but act on it. It's human to have urges, desires that don't fit inside the box. If we can find ways to deal with them in a manner that no one gets hurt, I say use them. This does not mean I condone ACTING on it. Child abuse is NOT OK. Child porn, NOT OK. Tricking anyone into a sexual act, NOT OK.
Clearly from the multitude of positive feedback (some kind of creepy, I must say, but positive, I guess!) and not just from men either, it's obvious that people DO get into it. The human body and psyche is a strange thing, sometimes things turn us on that isn't supposed to, sometimes simply BECAUSE it isn't supposed to. Someone isn't going to read this story and get turned on by it who isn't already turned on by it a little already. I could watch 1000 videos of a dude fucking a chicken, and as much as it might turn another on, I would still, in the end be only extremely nauseated and scarred for life. I don't think this story was intended to say hey, go molest a kid. I really hope not. If a ONE PAGE story is all it would take to convince someone who previously thought it abhorrent to give it a shot, I'd really doubt they were all that grounded in how they felt in the first place. So in probably unrealistic optimism, I must hope that if you show me a guy jerking off to this story, I'll show you a guy that (Oh, god please) isn't hurting anyone.
Near as I can tell, no one was hurt in the typing of this story. So, as much as I don't like what the writer says, I have to support his right to say it.
i really enjoyed yhe story, but i can't for the life of me , understand why some people are tryin to make more out of it then what it was ???/ come on people it's a story!! a good one , but still a story!unless they have the desires and are afraid to admit it??? lol
by
Anonymous11/24/07
mmm i loved it
....perfect daddy and daughter fantasy....as a "daddy's girl"...its just how i feel, how i felt, its the sweet baby talk and the closeness with daddy i will always love and that made your story so hot...thank you, write more!! from Southrnhearts@aol.com
by
Anonymous11/25/07
sick puppies
u are all sick to think subjecting a child to that kind of abuse is alright or even more so a turn on...
preserve your childs innocence. your destroying your children these ways if you love them truly you wouldnt want harm done as so.
i thought it was a great fantasy made me want some older man all over me i really enjoyed and im looking forward t oyour next one
by
11/27/07
Hmm...
I liked the story. It was well written but your comment at the beginning of not writing in ages was a little creepy. It was a complete turn off how childish the daughter acted. I don't understand why Daddy/Daughter scenes have to involve a stupid immature little girl.
English
good stiry
put full panties on daughter in next part to spice things up a little
A Beautiful Innocent Story
This story doesn't need any "spicing up" - just keep it going along the same theme - innocent accidental discovery. Leaving ages out makes it hard to visualise the degree of innocence and how far the "relationship" can go.
Please keep this as an innocent story of developing love and enlightenment between a father and daughter. Certainly such a deep relationship would be rare in today's self-righteous moralistic society. However, it is a still a fantasy story!
Carry on!
I hope this really is just a beginning - and that he gets it in her, soon!
Lukas
Sexy!!!!! Hot!!!!
Loved your story. Please continue it soon. I loved that you didn't mention an age for the daughter. Leaves it to the imagination of the reader. Thanks for a HOT HOT story. I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait for the rest of the story.
oh yeah!!! What a story!!
Man alive! What a start for a long totally erotic story!
I love the way you handled it. Keep up the great work! I am looking forward to more chapters!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
i try realy i do to not slam stories so i wont here just please make the next part more realistic .let her "grow" up please. "jakk"
Sweet and Slow
A daughter's first time w her daddy should be slow and sensual, full of the love and nervous energy that comes with the discovery sexual feelings. Think back to those first times and let your characters continue to develop the heat. Looking forward to more from you. My favorite fantasy. Her innocence can allude to the illegal for those that enjoy it or legality for those offended by younger experiences. Good technique
Fully Charged
You brought back fond memories from my own past .
Thank you .
endorsement
The best ass when they're eleven, and get better as time goes one!
Fab story!
Please keep going you are a really good writer!The whole innocence is just too yummy! The age thing does help but isnt need to to make it a great story.
Wow
It's stories like this that make you feel bad for liking them. So, I must feel like Satan himself right now. Please finish it!
wow!!
what a great story,a real turn on. it takes me back to my very first time with my dad. i was very young back then and he was a good teacher, i will love him forever !
golly!
i love the story my dad had me the same way. i guess he has her to in the story .my dad was so kind to me and it didnt hurt to much, the first time'
mmmmm
this was beautiful and hot and felt so true. thank you for writing about the most perfect relationship a girl can have
Great
A beautiful beginning that happens more often than you think. Keep it up. Another chapter soon please.
Really sweet !
Fantastic story ! Hope there is more :)
Very nicely
written and a caring encounter.
waiting
for the next installment!
More...........please?
a sweet innocent desire.......beautifully written
WOW
Defenitly a good storybut too short
best story on the site
This is by far the best story on this site. Please write more like this... Love the young character!
love the story
But would like to hear more, much much more!
Hmm...
I loved the story but u need to hurry and finish it.. i'd love to know how it ends.
We need more
This is really hot but I did get to wondering how old the girl is. Is she jail bait or not?
loving father
Great!!! My imagination is running wild!! I can hardly wait for more!
take it slow
build up her passion for her dad n teach her right. start out licking her n go from there
love the innocence
of julie and dad teaching her how to masturbate him is mindblowing
Young Pussy, i love it
I love the young & inocent, virgin pussy is the best.
please sir, can I have some more
I need to know what happens next, what does daddy teach his little girl?
Did not go far enough.
Father eating her also would have been much better,
Lick her Pussy Dad !
Great Start,Now you need to lick her Pussy and Slip a Finger into her Bum Hole.............Bobby
Great !!!
Love stories of dads fucking virgin daughters...can't wait for more
small hands, big cock
small hands and a big cock can only mean one thing: your "daughter" is too young! keep it a secret! that's sexual child abuse and it should be against the law to write filth like that! shame on you! my dad did that to me and now he's serving time, you should be too!
sick bloody sick
this is a sick story the lasy seems to be young and that makes this story very very sick i did not like it and will not read eny mor e of your story.
annonimus
Note about other posts
People this is Incest\Taboo, not the Lawful\consentual forum. I haven't read this piece yet, but judging by the first couple of negative posts, it's interesting to note how they can be so lawful and uptight! There is an issue about too young and I understand that, but they should take a look at the title of the forum. I might not like it, but I will still read and see for myself.
HOT! HOT! HOTTER!!!!
MY DAD AND I ARE LOVERS WE READ IT TOGETHER AND HE SAID AFTER I FINISH WITH MY COMMENT TO YOU HES GOING TO TAKE ME TO BED. WE REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY LINE CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART
More than just a little sick
C'mon stuff like this is,or should be against the law. We have no idea of the age of the gal but from her conversation and size of her hands we have to assume she is very young.
Interesting ... in more ways than one.
Ya gotta love these clowns who come on here to read porn but are all offended because it's not the kind of porn THEY like. I thought this stuff was all fantasy, not actual life experiences. As such, anything goes. If you don't like the topic, read something else. But don't try to tell us what we can read.
IN Loving Memory
That's about how it happened with my dad, he is gone now but thank you for awakening a wonderful memory.
Great Story
Just wanted to say I loved your story even though the girls age was not told. I still loved it. It brought back old memories and made my cock hard as a rock. Hope to read more soon.
As for the rude comments from others don't let it bother you they are jerks.
Big Al
Great sex story
I wish if ican fuck my daughter like this
I remember
My dad had me like that. many years ago now and people should know that no matter how young a girl or boy for that matter they all know something about sex and what things are for I know I did. I love the story and thanks for the reminder.
Great Story !
This story reminded me so much of me and my daughters experience as she was growing up. It was a very loving relationship enjoyed by my daughter as much as by myself. Thanks for the memories~~
Brings back memories!!!
Please take us farther into you secrets. It sure brings back memories of my first taste of my youngest daughter!
Not as creepy as the comments!
Ok, so the story did push a little far on the age thing. Small hands, bald pussy, baby talk, keep it our little secret, and then the explaination about the cum .."how mommy and I made you!" Daddy daughter stories are my favorite..never had the experience myself, but for some reason I dig it, but this..did not really imply consent, it felt more like trickery, taking advantage, and yes..abuse.
However..this is a VERY common fantasy (as a phone sex operator, I get plenty of requests for it), and the way I figure it, if someone is dealing with a taboo fantasy and it turns them on to read/talk about it, why not? I would rather have someone jerk off while reading a story like this (or talking to me or one of my colleagues) than have them repress it until they don't know what else to do but act on it. It's human to have urges, desires that don't fit inside the box. If we can find ways to deal with them in a manner that no one gets hurt, I say use them. This does not mean I condone ACTING on it. Child abuse is NOT OK. Child porn, NOT OK. Tricking anyone into a sexual act, NOT OK.
Clearly from the multitude of positive feedback (some kind of creepy, I must say, but positive, I guess!) and not just from men either, it's obvious that people DO get into it. The human body and psyche is a strange thing, sometimes things turn us on that isn't supposed to, sometimes simply BECAUSE it isn't supposed to. Someone isn't going to read this story and get turned on by it who isn't already turned on by it a little already. I could watch 1000 videos of a dude fucking a chicken, and as much as it might turn another on, I would still, in the end be only extremely nauseated and scarred for life. I don't think this story was intended to say hey, go molest a kid. I really hope not. If a ONE PAGE story is all it would take to convince someone who previously thought it abhorrent to give it a shot, I'd really doubt they were all that grounded in how they felt in the first place. So in probably unrealistic optimism, I must hope that if you show me a guy jerking off to this story, I'll show you a guy that (Oh, god please) isn't hurting anyone.
Near as I can tell, no one was hurt in the typing of this story. So, as much as I don't like what the writer says, I have to support his right to say it.
just a story
i really enjoyed yhe story, but i can't for the life of me , understand why some people are tryin to make more out of it then what it was ???/ come on people it's a story!! a good one , but still a story!unless they have the desires and are afraid to admit it??? lol
mmm i loved it
....perfect daddy and daughter fantasy....as a "daddy's girl"...its just how i feel, how i felt, its the sweet baby talk and the closeness with daddy i will always love and that made your story so hot...thank you, write more!! from Southrnhearts@aol.com
sick puppies
u are all sick to think subjecting a child to that kind of abuse is alright or even more so a turn on...
preserve your childs innocence. your destroying your children these ways if you love them truly you wouldnt want harm done as so.
i loved it
i thought it was a great fantasy made me want some older man all over me i really enjoyed and im looking forward t oyour next one
Hmm...
I liked the story. It was well written but your comment at the beginning of not writing in ages was a little creepy. It was a complete turn off how childish the daughter acted. I don't understand why Daddy/Daughter scenes have to involve a stupid immature little girl.
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