by SlaveToCock
Although the story is more sweet than sexy, it's still very very sweet. The sex is nice, although it's not as detailed as it might be. However, the strength of the story is in the love story, itself. And I think that could be expanded, too. Perhaps you might consider elaborating on all details. But I enjoyed it so much. It's just so sweet.
This is such a beautiful story. I really hope it's a true one. It gives hope to love of all kinds! I'm a sucker for a good "happily ever after" love story.
This was a beautiful story, and beautifully written. I don't usually go for stuff like this, but I couldn't have possibly enjoyed it more. Brilliant work.