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by Evil Alpaca11/12/04

A good beginning

Even though the sexual aspect is yet to come, I thought there's a lot of potential here. This intro is very well written.

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by Anonymous09/28/14

SOMETHING THERE???

GOOD START FOR A STORY BUT THAT IS ALL IT IS A START.


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