All Comments on 'For Marion's Pleasure Ch. 03'

really?

The writer did a very poor job on this pathetic story. In fact it seems the author has some serious mental illness mixed with some gay issues and cuckold issues that were transported to this pathetic story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

"...probably has gay issues, cuckold issues, and dominance issues".

Also, some peculiar race issues here, considering the stereotype of black men's cocks.

I thought it was good domination.

The white husband enjoying has place.

It was nice.

get a grip man, stop wasting your time wanking and writing this crap. It's just drivel.

I don't think that your critics understood this story.

If they want realisim go read a scientific paper.

This is Harry Potter.

I wrote the stories straight from my own experiences with my wife Marion, so if anyone doesn't like them, then move on, but for goodness sake, don't be a whining bitch; that's my job!!!

"I wrote the stories straight from my own experiences with my wife Marion" ... Yeah yeah sure you did. You might want to speak to a medical professional about the delusions you are suffering in your mind, they are clearly not healthy.

great story wife is truly adept at giving her husband what he needs.She should have him lick her ass clean everytime she shits also.once he has tits take him somewhere he can suck dick 12 hrs a day to support wife and her lover.for appreciation she could visit weekly and beat him senseless with bullwhip and let him kiss her feet breifly as his only reward for dedicating his life to her

I am getting hurt reading this storie when wife and lover kicks him in balls he should have died how dandmgeroys if man can die for mad fetish like that no respect for him now feminizing him kill your it's finished your not person anymore don't deserve live like this get the easy way out die or get way form all this shut go to church confess move on

Wife have lover came straight hell,breaking husbands or manhood in him he should have died yet survived@, did he deserve this much pain God have mercy on him the husband better take him back make him die send him heaven he deserve much better their touture is too much for him. is there any women like the wive here better kill him get over with it go slut or prostitute yourself sadistic maniac women

It's too much wife kicks husband in the balls again and again this type of bdsm cuckholding should have been her husbands murder he should have died so cruel he should have his balls ruptured and throat destroyed same time she will learn her lesson when cuck dies by accident by her