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My Wife is a HO-HO-HO

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by Anonymous

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by MightyHorny11/20/17

Cold as ice

Hey - if you have the time and resource to pull this off, it sure is the way to go!

Nice flash story, Magicidan; hopefully, we won't have to wait too long for your next one.

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by Kerry357911/20/17

Lmfao

excellent bravo

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by imatrojanman11/20/17

I dig it!

Great flash story! One thing it would be nice to see though, is what present he had for her boss! Guy screws my wife in MY bed?? Brother has to pay! Big Time!!!

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by fifteen1611/20/17

Nasty

Have i missed something? i cannot see anywhere that his children knew of her adultery so why spoil their Xmas, inform them with the evidence of course but not then in that manner. A revenge story yes but on who exactly.

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by Jetcrash74711/20/17

Merry Christmas!

That is one cold surprise, nice way to let the family know that mommy is a slut. Kinda appropriate letting her explain what she was doing. Don't blame hubby for the unexpected gifts.

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by chytown11/20/17

Flash***

ZZZZZZZ

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by sluttysublad11/20/17

what a load of crap

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by LordSlamdawgg11/20/17

Hark ! The Herald Angels' Subpoena : Flash Story Abombinates with Iffy Self-satisfaction at Breaking Floozy Butterfly Bride on Wheel of Yuletide Wreath / Wrath

A real man would have gritted his teeth at first sight of damming detective report, and soldiered on until after Christmas, serving dissolution papers to cozening wife before New Year so his FAMILY would be spared ripples of shock and pain . But Magicdan was playing to cheap seat where eye for eye faction resides.

Teaching moments and classing it up weren't on literary agenda . This is just a story, but. the bottom line is the narrator's Christmas will be under timing of painful circumstances revealed for his individual gain , the rest of family not so much

Any husband that would play this gotcha game has lost the moral high ground. She cheated but seems to have strayed on self centered narcissist . Small wonder,. dude was definitely two pump chump in terms of being altruistic family leader and most likely in between sheets as well.

Bottom Line.: I usually five star Magicdan, but will save my quintuple supernovas for Yuletide yarns where scion of family is less naughty and takes one for the team.

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by swedishreader111/20/17

Needs editing.

Also this has been done before many times .......minus the santa
3* and that is being generous

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by kimi199011/20/17

Sorry, not my deal

Okay, yeah, divorce time, I get that. I don't get what the rest of the family did to deserve the hand-grenade, sans pin, in their Christmas stockings, not to mention what the kids are going to wake up to in the morning. "Look, carnage for Christmas!" Lovely. It may be that all the adults were in on it, but the story doesn't say so, and I feel pretty confident the kids weren't. Nice guy. Just a little revenge fantasy, I guess, but the shrapnel seems pretty indiscriminate. Have to give this one a low score.

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by ju8streading11/20/17

could use another chapter. this is a start

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by Impo_6411/20/17

Just missing a detail...

Just missing a detail: It would have been a blast even more unforgettable if he had made her invite her boss and his family to this Christmas Eve...I understand the comments saying he could have waited...But if we think a little more, we can see, that the wife was the one that ruined that Cristmas...And after all their four children were all adults with 10 children of their own...3*

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by penneydog5511/20/17

Oh Man This Is So Not A Christmas Carol

Deck the halls with Kerosene..Strike a Match and watch it gleam.... watch it burn to the ground Tra la la tis the season to be a Bastard Tra la la la la
This story needs another chapter to finish it Thanks for sharing this Great story with us ★★★★★ WOOF!
The first part of the comment is a Christmas Carol on Steroids MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE! May we have World Peace!

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by Britease11/20/17

I like flash stories

and this was about as good as they get

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by 69man6911/20/17

Super

Thanks for the quick & humerous flash btb

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by boatbumm11/20/17

Love It!

Can't wait to see the video on YouTube! ;-)

Thanks for this fun little flash!

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by HippySwinger11/20/17

Lousy human being

What a waste of skin, ruining the holiday for the family, especially the grand kids. Anybody who thinks this BtB is good is just as bad as he is. Not worth a star.

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by RePhil11/20/17

Perfection in brevity!

The ultimate challenge to cram a perfect story into a single page! Well done Sir!
5 & FAV

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by bruce2211/20/17

Effective Writing

The problem is that of placing your wife in a car bomb in the middle of a shopping plaza does not seem like a fun solution to the pain in the chest.

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by sbrooks103x11/20/17

Flash

Okay, it was just a little flash story, so I can cut it some slack, but why not a description of the family's reaction beyond a scream?

As others have said, what did the kids and grandkids to to deserve their Christmas being ruined?

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by tazz31711/20/17

ITS BETTER TO GIVE THAN RECEIVE

and now the spin and quibbling begins, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by fireman52711/20/17

Too Short

Enjoyed the story - you should build on it and add another chapter or 2.

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio11/20/17

A little nit to pick

Story was well-written but he has all those grandchildren, yet he was married only twenty years? Must have fathered his children long before he married his wife; that, or maybe his children started in their early teens. Thirty or thirty-five years of marriage would have made more sense. Also agree he should not have ruined Christmas for the children and grandchildren, as other readers have pointed out.

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by silentsound11/20/17

Hahaha!

Ok. Good sharp fun!

Nasty but fun.

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by gldngolfer11/20/17

Same camp

I'm in the same camp as others with ruining the grandkids Christmas. The cheating bitch deserves to have her Christmas ruined, but not the grandkids. The husband will need his kids support and his grandkids love to sustain him before and after the divorce and he just put a bullet in all that.

I would have enjoyed the story more if grandkids weren't involved and you described the actual reaction and immediate aftermath in detail when the bitch opened her envelope.

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by amischiefmaker11/20/17

Very original

Really great story -- even though I gave it a 5 it needed one more thing -- our hero actually witnessing the reactions in his house rather than slinking away.

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by dragonmann7211/20/17

The numbers don,t add up

Four weeks earlier I learned my wife of twenty years...the mother of my children...was fucking her boss.

The grandkids let out a shriek when Santa knocked on the front door

Our four children gathered all ten grandchildren to sing a chorus of Here Comes Santa Claus.

OK, I'm not an accountant but your numbers don;t add up. Maybe you meant thirty years.

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by michaela_mc11/20/17

Oh Please....

LMAO.. Too funny!

This deserves a follow up!

***** 5 *****

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by SomeOneTwoThree11/20/17

Wow.

What a fun idea!
And a great name for a story!
Alas it's too short.
Why allow his revenge to
hurt all of his family?
Was there a reason for this?
These questions are too important
to go unanswered.
4 out of 5 from me, for a brilliant idea.

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by stillaonewomanm11/20/17

too short

Come on now My mind really needs the full blown btb.

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by Concritic12311/20/17

A good flash story.......

And yea, the dates don't add up unless this is his second marriage. You get that with flash stories.

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by Justtoold11/20/17

Neat

This was a neat flash story with a bit of an original idea on how to get some revenge. Keep them coming.

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by Crusader23511/20/17

HO!

HO fucking Ho Ho! Excellent revenge, 5 Stars! How about the rest of the story, sometime later?

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by CHET122011/20/17

LET US SEE THE REST IT,

HOW MANY OF THE KID,S ARE HIS , WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...

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by bayernpeter111/20/17

Why???

Why incorporating the kids and grandkids? Why destroying their christmas? Are they involved in the cheating? That story has to much unknown quantity to be a good one! True its funny to do it at christmas, but the wife and he alone would have sufficed!

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by sgt54811/20/17

Ho Ho Ho

Ho Ho Ho? More like Ha Ha Ha. A good one.

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by C_frommn11/20/17

Loved It!

As for the Kids they are all grown ups. as for the Grand Kids they like all little children would be in another room playing and Talking about their gifts to here the Adults erupt would be nothing New. if it was an Annual Party like was stated in the Beginning. With everyone receiving copies of the Wife & Boss there would be No Room for Lies.

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by betrayedbylove11/20/17

HA

I liked it but it needs more detail.

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by towg11/20/17

Grandkids??

I was thinking this was going to be good. Until the children... then it lost any appeal.

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by MaxiMilf11/20/17

NEED MORE

Great twist on the classic consequences story of a cheating whore wife. Enjoyed it. BUT...We need more. How about a part 2 offering some detail leading up to Christmas Eve and all the screwing around the whore wife did during the Advent season? I'll look forward to a part 2. Go for it!

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by Mordant9611/21/17

Great Start on a Great Story

You can get at least two more stories out of this. Before Christmas Eve and the week after. You said you had a buddy video-ing the whole thing. Describe in excruciating detail what the cheating wife did after she was outed.

Go for it!

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by Spencerfiction11/21/17

A great flash story

Ok, it did need proofreading and the length of time married didn’t really add up to the presence of 10 grandkids, but they were safely out of the way with great presents to avoid ruination of their night, and if the adults were already drinking for 3 hours before 8pm, the visit of Santa was probably the signal for wind down of the party anyway; I’m sure the parents would be getting away with their designated drivers soon to get the kids to bed. I guess the scream was "Christmas" Carole realising the significance of being served, which she missed the first time around.

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by MattblackUK11/21/17

I liked it!

Although there's enough there, it was a perfect flash story, after all, I think that perhaps this might make a good basis for a 12 Days of Cheating Christmas story.

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by gordo1211/21/17

A great flash story

the kids....meeehhh could have done without them involved. 4*

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by Master_falcon9011/21/17

Good flash story but..............

Wish this wasn't a flash story. Would like to seen wife response.and how it played out

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by regularguy1311/21/17

You started so well

I liked what you wrote, but that was a scene not a story. You also lost points for not giving us any sex. This is an erotic website!!!

You could have had flashbacks to the wife cheating. Then lead us through the husband becoming suspicious, hiring the detective, watching a video of his wife screwing, etc...

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by afanoffanlit11/21/17

I wish you would have described the mayhem that was about to ensue!!

Good story!

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by tbakky11/21/17

Wife of 20 Years?

The MC says wife of 20 yrs,yet you have 4 Children and 10 Grandchildren.Time wise how is this possible?

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by etchiboy11/22/17

Brilliant !

Absolutely brilliant. 5-stars from me.

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by etchiboy11/22/17

Time discrepancy. Yeah...

I noticed the time discrepancy; 20 years and so many grand kids? But that’s easily fixed. Make it 25 years. There. Fixed.

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