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Great Story
Great Story. Write More
In your dreams
Yeah, right, like this could happen. The theme was lame and the mechanics were lamer. Get an editor and at least present a well written story, even if it is garbage.
great
good story for a first post.keep up the good work
Hot family fun!
Keep the story cumming! and welcome to Lit!
GREAT STORY
YES KEEP ON WRITING MORE.
Great Story!!!
Wewll done...excellent effort for your first attempt.....it really hit the mark with me and I was reading faster and faster towards the end as I was dying to find out what happened to her next!!.
Keep up the good work and I cant wait to read the next installment
Best wishes.
Suzi
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love the story very erotic
great written story very erotic and full of the right things
such as cumming and sucking arsefucking love the cumming in the mouth bit last of all standing over her cumming all over her
great
hot and well written.....i think you should adopt me
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