All Comments on 'Mr. Simms Has Pics of Me in a Dress'

Sure hope there is gonna be more of this

I think Carman will have a great summer. I look forward to her success in the coming chapters

I wish I had a Mr Simms to help me out!

Did he ever find his cat though?

I for one can’t wait to read more

A good start, that opens all sorts of possibilities going forward.

Adventures with MR. Simms or to his aunt, mother and sister finding out he stole their things.

Keep going

Mr. Simms Has Pics of Me in a Dress!

He'll want his cock up my A-S-S-!

And I'd dumb enough let the old perv!

When I ought to bust his head on a curb!

Stupid story. Told and retold many times.

I think it's a wonderful start with a lot of promise

It's amazing how the anonymous criticism is always there. Don't worry about them they will still read each and every episode of which I hope you write a few. Oh they will still troll but that's after they have cum and the guilt sets in that they wished they were Carmen or Mr Simms. I enjoyed it please continue.

. I would love to read the continuing story, Wigs, with varied hair colors and styles. Small and larger breast forms! Wonderful, there is a lot of potential here, please do continue!

Don't listen to the 'doubters' let your character take the lead and follow him/her into erotic places, but not too much too quickly!!

This has such a great start, I can't wait for more. Please write on!! I have used this start to create so many orgasms I lost count!!! After all, isn't that what these stories are for??? I am so excited thinking about where this can go!

Oh man that got me so hard when I read it , the tension was palpable throughout and I came buckets too

Please continue this story. I can't wait to read about Carmen sucking Mr. Simms' cock and getting fucked. He would be the sexy female secretary and maybe some hot hunky clients will also feed him their cocks. Please tell us more. I can't wait.

This is such a great start to a series. Please don't leave it here. More please. Make it a long series.

Ok Carmen has been born now give her life Please Tom/Tami

OMG, you have to continue! I have come close to living that fantasy...please continue! Maybe she becomes his personal assistant and with makeup and clothes she passes very well and goes on a small business trip to Vegas. Make sure she starts to evolve, shaving everything and wears stw pantyhose...and that she starts to tease him and evolve into a cute horny girl!

That is such a hot story! I want to know more!

Please I need more Carmen. I’m so hot and bothered after reading that story I think I need to dress up and jerk off right now!

Needs a little editing, but very hot! Can't wait to hear about the outfits and the places Carmen's mouth finds...

this was great. your other stories are a little twisted but this one didn't really seem nonconsensual at all

Couldn't stop reading. I hope you finish the story. Can't wait to see what happens

Felt so horney wanting more and more

Keep writing

Would love more to this story