All Comments on 'Santa's Perverted Helper'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!

What a great heartwarming tale. Really, really enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Noughty Christmas

splendid story idea, well–written. Just a few editing oversights.

Thanks

S

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Magical!!

This is like hallmark channel and porn...all the emotional masterbation and all the physical. It's perfect for the season. Loved it. If only there was a hallmark porn channel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Santa's Helper needs an Elf

Maybe in the next chapter after Susie receives some anal treatment, for slipping back into her old ways, she would be recruited to be Santa's helper's elf.

Manthing2Manthing2over 5 years ago
Trainee wishing to report for duty

Outstanding. Unique. Enjoyed the variety. Not the same old thing. Originality is the key to a great story. Hit the mark squarely. Good job.

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