by rutger5
What a great heartwarming tale. Really, really enjoyable.
splendid story idea, well–written. Just a few editing oversights.
Thanks
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This is like hallmark channel and porn...all the emotional masterbation and all the physical. It's perfect for the season. Loved it. If only there was a hallmark porn channel.
Maybe in the next chapter after Susie receives some anal treatment, for slipping back into her old ways, she would be recruited to be Santa's helper's elf.
Outstanding. Unique. Enjoyed the variety. Not the same old thing. Originality is the key to a great story. Hit the mark squarely. Good job.