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Hermit in a Shell

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by WickedEve11/09/04

your poem

is mentioned on the new poems review thread.

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by Maria239411/09/04

:)

loved it, really enjoyed your voyage, and if I saw you, legs up about to drown, I promise I would flip you over so you could scuttle back into the sand and breathe :)

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by LilDarlin11/10/04

Imagery~

Aww this is a great one~~!!!.Loved the whole poem. The imagery was marvelous. Could see that poor lil ole crab, beaten, carried, shell cracked..and swept away..Loved it. Wonderful poem, and so darn cute..More Please~~~!!!

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