by pvclook
Thank you so much! I can't tell you how much I enjoy this story and your writing, but thank you!
so much for coming back the thought of this story crossing my mind has been enough to give me an erection for more then a year
Awesome as allways, i wish the story can continue. You are an awesome writer.
please continue this story, can't wait to read more, keep up the writing
This truly is one of the best stories I have read ( and I have read a LOT of them), but the writing (spelling, grammar and flow) is truly one of the worse I have seen.
If the story had not peaked my interest the way it did, I would have not read further because of the terrible writing.
Please please please continue with this story line...but please DO let a friend who knows proper English proofread it before posting it.
Perhaps LBCNL should check his/her grammar as well! The comment should read “piqued my interest” rather than “peaked my interest.”
Amazing the visuals you cause by your writing is amazing i havnt been able to stop reading please continue!!!! Honestly the best erotica i have ever read!!!