All Comments on 'It's All Good'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
sweet and simple

Short, sweet, and to the point. Definitely inspires a girl to want a quickie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Missed the point

A good and erotic story, but missed the point. Two paragraphs DO NOT make this an anal story. You have to concentrate on the fetish, rather than just absently throw in a couple of lines about it at the end. The author writes well, and certainly evokes the intended desires, but needs to learn how to target the intended readership. Flesh out the descriptions of the anal itself far more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good...

and hot!

ImagetakerImagetakerover 17 years ago
Warning: Do not read this at work.

I am stuck behind my desk as this story was perhaps too arousing. Granted, it is not a true 100% pure anal story, but what the hell -- "its all good".

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