All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 15'

Been waiting! Good direction but for some reason theirs a dept missing on the prince's family emotional side....they seem so very cliche ?

uhmmm..God i lyk that,i want it,i want plear,.God am feeling power in me..I lyk this..William,huh he is agreat fool

Thanks to fool william the truth is out..Hehe i liked the priest toked to the king.Hahaha yummy,how the priest shown the truth..Poor luis oh i cried when he fainted,that guy shudnt suffer but yah let him plead,haha it's just beginning

oh hana,charles,poor king,queen mother and queen Ruby..Its all that whore william's fault..yah as granny said,let them die terribly,huh

how did u see Aid's arrogancy,God he should do that to luis too..Hehehe how they were thrown back to the jet haha,how king j. pleaded.Hahahaha my Aid,but he may have mercy atleast for the family and people's lives

YUM,NOM..oh let me read again my own cake..hahaha my favorito writer KING HIMSELF/MY KING/MY VANALAS I LOVE U

FOR WYATT,let him die in hell am not scared,i HATE him plus that whore son..God all of them

Now,luis's turn to cry..and beg but after plz our man shud be happy

God,i Aidan is what i lyk

OH now Aidan shud be back.bring back our sweet love..Jacob shud see his georgus father..We also have to deal with the blah blah wyatt foolish family,yuck

the theme song is........No air from luis to Aidan

we are never getting back-taylor swift from Aid to luis

no crime from re-reading isn't it??

I kiss you

Ever since I first came across destined I have loved your stories .....sometimes I will go back and reread a chapter as I wait for the next one...I love your stories and can't wait for the next chapter....hoping aiden comes and saves the day and sends William to hell for what he did to Luis....but I also hope he makes Luis beg for forgiveness....

The higher they rise the harder they fall .... Wyatt has to rely on the power of the sceptre and the ancient worlock to have the power that he has ... In other words it is nothing but fake!

Aidan is able to call on the power that is within him and given to him by the all mighty without chanting and without having to thinjk twice ... He is the ancestor of the ancient power what was he callled the Wizard with a Mission? somthing like that ... He is not just someone seeking the power for their own glory and to cause chaos he uses his power for good ... Let's think who will win? Bring it on!!!!...

HAHAHA,DAMN U WYATT

Amazing work! Waiting for the next chapter impatiently.

the thrill is just starting...love it! chapter 16 pls...everyday i am waiting for your new chapter.

I actually skipped most of this chapter......like watching a three hour movie that could have been done in an hour.....I really like the story, but like I said it goes on, and on, and on............

Thats how i like it if u ask me anon,,i want it gradually just like he

gives it to us...I cant wait

Like the other comment this could have been summed up in one hour.