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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

damn

AbastAbastover 6 years ago
Good first step! (:

If this were just the beginning than it seems like it will be a fun ride. If it is the end than i still think it was a good story. Every story does not have to have vaginal/anal penetration to be good hehe though i do prefer them myself. I hope You had fun writing it (:

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!!

When is the next chapter due?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cute!

I feel like this is so hot and cute. Making a second one would be great!

AwkwardOrpheusAwkwardOrpheusover 5 years ago
Building the tension.

For a short story, the developing sexual tension build up succeeded exceptionally well. I can only hope there will be another chapter. But then again, you always want to leave them hungry for more.

masculinbrainmasculinbrainabout 5 years ago
We all want dex.

This story reminds us that we all want sex, and there is nothing we can do about it. We just need to click together - gtrat story.

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