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by Anonymous

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by Reltne11/12/04

"Like"

I think that this is one of your better efforts. The only thing that scratches at me is your use of "like" in every stanza. You might want to think about reducing the similes, replacing with a direct metaphor, or at least try an "as" every now and then. :)

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by Annora11/13/04

Good work~

L~ liked it~

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by LeBroz08/13/05

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A little bit of loving indeed;
feel the heat!

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by tazz31706/06/12

HOW DOES ONE GIVE RATINGS

without comparing the rest of another, TK U MLJ LV NV

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