I normally enjoy the more explicit mature stories on this site. Coming across this story was a very pleasant diversion, thank you. I enjoyed this gentle story very much.
Nice and gentle with a hint of whats to come. My SAGA catalogue doesnt arrive until next year, but I would like to look forward to opportunities and new adventures when it does...
Shouldn't most of your stories be more accurately placed in the "Non-Erotic" category? That would set up a definite expectation, which in turn could lead to more accurate voting.
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Anonymous11/18/04
Fab1
Really enjoyed this. It's extremely well written. All the best.
I've been doing a hunt through the old holiday stories lists to try and find a story I read years ago. So far it's not paying off with the story in question... but with a few very wonderful stories (hidden amid piles of brain cell destroyers). This was one of the best I have read to be sure.
Lovely gentle story
I normally enjoy the more explicit mature stories on this site. Coming across this story was a very pleasant diversion, thank you. I enjoyed this gentle story very much.
Fine
Dear Oggbashan,
Nothing else can describe this story for me but "FINE"!
Thanks, keep it up
Yours
John/Namizujs
Budapest
excellent
A wonderful story and a writing lesson as well.
Your stories...
Make me all warm inside. They say so much with just a few paragraphs. Good luck !
Excellent
Nice and gentle with a hint of whats to come. My SAGA catalogue doesnt arrive until next year, but I would like to look forward to opportunities and new adventures when it does...
Another Oggbashan job well done
But I wonder if Hazel would have still gone off with him if he had a Bentley instead of a Rolls? :)
Rumple
The Main course?
I want to hear what happened at the honeymoon suite
a pleasure as always Og~
Happy Holidays and good luck~
Art~
a question....
Shouldn't most of your stories be more accurately placed in the "Non-Erotic" category? That would set up a definite expectation, which in turn could lead to more accurate voting.
Fab1
Really enjoyed this. It's extremely well written. All the best.
just a very nice story
Nice work.
Fine scheming for a bright Christmas.
Let me see if I have this right — Jeremy gets to do the stuffing with Hazel, while the Jones Sisters get the bird.
Cute story, Og.
Da BOMB!
An entertaining read, Og.
Perhaps we need a new category
I loved the story, but was disappointed then it ended before Christmas! Maybe there needs to be a category for Mature Anticipation.
:)
Nice. Somewhat posh but nice..Why not let them ride a bicycle or a tandem into the sunset? Cheers Yoron
I loved it! What a chuckle.
Beautifully done
And so concise, too!
Handley Page
A Pirate went questing
Hello Ogg.
I've been doing a hunt through the old holiday stories lists to try and find a story I read years ago. So far it's not paying off with the story in question... but with a few very wonderful stories (hidden amid piles of brain cell destroyers). This was one of the best I have read to be sure.
An absolute beautiful story. Thank you.
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