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All Comments on 'My Teacher: The Arrangement'

by Jim Stand

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
lead in

I liked your style of writing and you story is good. Why not let the theme build up a little more at the beginning? Try it for future submissions. Its nice to be teased for a while during the opening sequences. Best wishes

Just@FanJust@Fanover 19 years ago
Will there be more

I hope you write something more for this. Until then I remain...

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