by KarmasToy
Excellent story, very well written, and helped me squirt my load all over the place. Hope to read more from you!
To crouch is to squat. A crotch is that area between your legs.
Great story apart from that detail.
You're off to a strong start!
Good details...and interior monologues!
I really enjoyed the first 90%, but the ending was a little confusing.
I would have liked him to just be watching from the window.
5 Stars though!