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by LeBroz12/18/06

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Considering the absence of love
And of one's love
To be so
Extreme;

The alternative
A loveless life
With no
Passion,
So inadequate;

The pain's preferred.

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by duddle14601/22/07

Everything.

Endure the frustration and pain ~ or have nothing at all.

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