All Comments on 'Labor Day Lesbian Rapture Ch. 02'

by susietreasure

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GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 12 years ago
Interesting

Of course you realize that, while the characters are female, the action of this piece has transitioned from lesbian sex with BDSM overtones to a BDSM story with lesbian overtones. Anyway, the thing you do very well is relate how Suzie's inner world transforms and you give the reader a good view of her amazement at what both repels and attracts her. I'm not really into serious BDSM, so I'm reluctant to read Ch. 03, but your writing is so good that I can't not. Mmmm, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please move this to BDSM

This involves violence and pain and should be in the BDSM category not lesbian sex.

RastanuraRastanuraabout 4 years ago
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That's more tan I could take. But I love the imagery.

kbone1kbone15 months ago

Wow! Gwen is nastier than Heather

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