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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve11/13/04

wow, this is really good :)

It may be the best "smile" poem I've ever read. :) It's also mentioned on the new poems review thread. And here's another smile. :)

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by Esteban0311/13/04

Lovely

.....as always. Will the Denizens series continue? I hope so

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by LilDarlin11/13/04

Sweet~

Soft..Sweet..Sensual..Just flows smooth as silk. Loved it..

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by Maria239411/13/04

love the title!!

and the rest of the work is a perfect fit, here and there, never still, never golden, perfectly conveyed, :)

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by twelveoone11/14/04

totally agree with

Maria,
except I liked this also
"A tivoli life"

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by flyguy6911/15/04

Great!

I love the "almost visible" feel to ths poem; always at the periphery of perception

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by Anonymous01/21/05

wow

The title sounds interesting but then you had to write the rest. Damn shame.

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