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Husband's Revenge Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by ed111/15/04

Great start!!!

Great story so far, just please don't make this guy a whimp! She is cheating and has in the past. It's time to pay and see if it was worth lossing everything including him a loving husband and her sons respect. Then have him find a really pretty, sexy women and move on. Leaving her with her loveless affairs.

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by Anonymous11/15/04

Again

I have read this story before... I even remember the ending and I can tell you that the hubby is not a wimp.... unless this writter makes changes

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by gizzmo30111/15/04

Again

I have read this story before... I even remember the ending and I can tell you that the hubby is not a wimp.... unless this writter makes changes

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by Anonymous11/15/04

hope you tear them a new ashole

take her nad them for all you can get and more if possible then find a nice woman for yourself maybe you also need to have blondy pay your youngest sons college

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by Anonymous11/16/04

Whimp:

Please don't end the story with the husband backing down. Then it just becomes depressing and sad. Need some Justice and a good resolution.

Jim

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by Anonymous11/16/04

Making the wrong right

So far I really love your story. Now I wait for the next chapter. Hopefully it will deal properly with the lady who likes to play...Now maybe she will also pay for her misdeeds.

She is really deserving of any purnishment that he sends her way.

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by Anonymous11/16/04

More-Please!

DNA test first. If his suspicions are correct, she's got to be made to kill herself. It's never too late for him to track down the other perps and de-dick them. She's got to pay the ultimate price for being that rotten.

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by Anonymous11/16/04

PLEASE

Let the revenge be well thought and clever. don't resort to having her gangraped by a bunch of black guys. Be more original than that.

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by gnf11/16/04

First read this on ASSTR.org.

Liked it then and unless you changed it I will like it again.

I assume that you are the original Headhunter and the original author.

George

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by Anonymous11/16/04

Time for Payback

The slut may be too old for life as a whore - but if he sold her she might bring five hundred dollars for a blowjob whore - just have the pimp pull her teeth - a short life of sucking at gloryholes or in back alleys sounds just the thing for this kind of betrayl - going back since they were married.

Just hope the payback is appropriate - and public disclosure and humiliation would be too good for this pig.

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by fumunda cheeze11/16/04

Wheels Of Justice

are turning. This story is taking a turn for the better. fucking other men is one thing. Pawning her bastard on her husband and laughing about it is an unpardonable offense. The story sounds familiar like I might have read it on another site. Not wanting to reveal it's content to readers who have not yet read it, I remain silent. It gets GOOD as the revenge is applied to her sorry ass.

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by EspressoBolus11/16/04

Ancient and Unfinished!

Why does this story fragment keep getting reposted when it is at least three years old and unfinished?

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by don8765411/16/04

Insufficient Ending Gets an Insufficient Scoring

Ya don't finish the story, ya don't get a good score.

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by Anonymous11/16/04

Sweet, sweet, revenge!

Please post the rest quickly! I LOVE the Loving Wives stories where the husband has the balls to avenge himself.

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by Anonymous11/16/04

Inadequate Dickhead

What a total dickhead - it's taken him 20 years to realise his wife has been screwing around.The moron deserves all he has got !!

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by X-Factor11/20/04

good buildup

Now finish the job right. Be very graphic about her sexcapades before he pulls the plug on the whole thing. It would have been nice if you described her sex with her boss as it happened before hubby's eyes.

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by Anonymous02/01/08

Hey Tales...I hate to tell you but your hero is a

dumbass. Any man that allows his wife to have several different affairs over a period is just plain brain dead or lives in a fairy world. Any real man would have went into the hotel room and confronted the slut. Any man with an ounce of brains would have copied all the pictures and letters. What does hero do but hid them again...How can you live with yourself knowing that you took leave of your senses with the story and made it to dumb to read anymore.

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by Anonymous03/05/08

Oh My GOD...They are having STRAWBERRIES

and champaigne...That was their ..get it their...thing when they made love and here she is doing that with another man...forget that she sucks his cock probably drinks his pee also...forget that he had rammed his cock in her butt and mixed cum with her shit many times and she licked it off later...It was her and him having Strawberriers and champaigne...wow now that's heavy..I would have thrown up also...Get a fucking pair of balls you dumd ass dufus cookold...she's fucking him and you can only stopm your feet...oh I'm so mad that I could spit nails...but I had better act like the liberal little puke I am and get evidence...Hey dufus don't you know that busting the door in and whiping his and hers ass right then and there will do bad things to a man's hardon...marriedwithballs@yahoo.com

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by JeffTom10/27/10

I hate Sally

Boy this story makes me hate Sally!

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by Anonymous06/21/11

Nice story

And southeast US in the bio explains the racism.

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by greyfalcon07/20/11

Dumb characters

I didn't understand a couple of things.
What need was there of the husband to suffer the humiliation by staying in the neighboring room and listening to the two of them have sex? He knew what was going on. He should have left after the sight of the elevator. It makes me want to think that he might have wanted to hear the moans of his wife with an another man. No need of the self inflicted pain here.
Why would any sane person keep a record of their previous affairs in their house? There's always a possibility that anyone might stumble upon them. Leave that. How can a person having affairs for so long get a GUILTY look on their face? I hope i get as to see why the wife cheated on for so long and not read that 'i was bored and i wanted to spice it up but i love you'.
3 stars.

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by DWornock07/28/11

46 years old, your wife is 45

20 years too old to rate more than the 1* I gave it.

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by Anonymous07/28/11

Didn't read but

I'm going to vote the opposite of dw because he's a douche. 5 stars.

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by Anonymous12/18/11

DWmoroncock is so old

her birth certificate says "expired"

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by chytown01/24/12

Is This.

About to get nasty????

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by betrayedbylove04/06/12

Oh Boy

I can't wait to read ch. 2.

HA

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by Anonymous06/09/12

traitor

he swallowed the slimy jizz, cornhole took a reaming, betrayed!

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by Anonymous01/18/13

Just another wimp faggot husband

It's no wonder the wife has been Fucking around, her husband is a fembag little faggot. Pathetic

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by tazz31710/27/13

WHEN ONE IS SURROUNDED

the best plan is to attack. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/21/14

!!! - triple exclamation marks don't belong in a story, at least not outside of direct quotes. There are some other minor things as well, but I think if an editor/beta-reader touched the story up, most of that could easily be eliminated.

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by KarenE08/18/14

What The Fuck?

Why didn't he barge in with the room service and lick some ass?

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by Anonymous12/17/14

nuther puking wimp

no wonder she is with another man, if he is this wimpy.
3 stars but????????????????

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by Tim41341304/25/15

Three more chapters.

I suspect she's going to be in a world of hurt. No. Don't barge into the room. Collect "evidence," including illeg. son, confront her and demand she not contest the divorce or property settlement. Else, he'll tell the sons, her family, his family, etc. Never repeat that message again - in case she starts recording their conversations. Simply tell her, during the confrontation, his code = "Don't fuck with me" = you are getting close to me spilling the beans. I suspect, however, this author is not going to let her off that lightly. Donkey show in Tijuana?

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by Tim41341304/25/15

BTW

The tags sucked.

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by Anonymous12/19/15

Who is this person?

"Finally, six weeks after my friend had told me to be careful, I decided I had to find out the truth."

He waits six weeks! Why do authors do this? They just spoil the credibility of the whole plot, such a shame....

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by sinstalker02/14/16

Lick?

I hope you meant kick. @KarenE. Lol

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by silentsound08/03/16

Ihg...

Yukky slutty.

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by Anonymous08/31/16

Sally,Sally Sally.

If you really pay attention to your wife You can tell if she´s been used. First, the pussy doesn´t stay gaped . As it fights to get back to its normal size it will over compensate making it feel a lot tighter than normal. The first time you saw them parked at the Hilton if you would have insisted on sex you would have caught her then and there. Instead of going through all those weeks of anxiety. I went through that with my late wife but I confronted her the first time I noticed the difference I explained to her how she normally felt and how she felt that day plus the way she had been acting. She started to deny it but then realized she had been caught.

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by Anonymous10/19/16

Fag

Only a fag author could create a male character this pathetic and wimpy..... She is just a blood stain on the rug to most.....

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by Anonymous01/08/17

worse than sally and her husband

LOG INTO FACEBOOK FIND PROFILE OF dearbornmt@yahoo.com
Profile provides details and offers contact info of real life serial cheating wife. Lost her job as college instructor in Helena Montana because of that info and more
Worse yet-husband knows of her affairs and does nothing but cry to her mother about it. Her own mother told him to ''DIVORCE THE SLUT'' he didn't
While she was screwing the student she coerced she would return home on Fridays , leave panties on floor and take bath. She was aware of his panty sniffing fetish. While watching her bathe, he would prepare for his Friday night blowjob by pressing her very soiled and wet panties to his face. Full details of episodes are available from Facebook profile by simple request.
Email to lover upon returning home and IM engaged in later that night describe first occurence. In email upon returning home after afternoon in bed she wrote about getting shivers feeling his cum oozing into panties and sitting on huge wet spot during her hour long commute home.
She had taken a shower after afternoon of sex and was getting ready to leave when student wanted another round. Fully dressed with fresh makeup on she was giving blowjob when cell phone rang. It was her husband wondering where she was it was after 5pm and he was already hom from week of work on road. She should have been home. She told student she had to leave as hubby was waiting for bj. Thing is she had repeatedly told student husband had no sexual interest in her in order to get student into bed. When student reminded her she had laughed at him.
Student was angry at deception and laid instructor back on bed, flipped up her skirt, pulled her panties aside and threw a fast and furious fuck into her. The instructor mocked student asking him if he ''liked fucking in his own cum?'' Angered the student rammed it in as hard and deep as he could and kept her tight against him and then as he ejaculated he sneered at teacher and told her to ''TAKE THAT HOME TO YOUR HUSBAND!!'' Instructor's eyes got wide and those words aroused her as she began thrusting up while her pussy started fluttering
Student pulled out of a very full pussy, his cocked slimy and dripping and wiped himself off on her black wool skirt, making sure to leave a big spot with semen being obvious. Anyone looking at skirt later would be sure to note and know white the crusty substance was

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