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Straight to the heart~
Wow.. Felt this go straight to my heart.Deep and so meaningful.Always searching for the answers to life, and seeking something that can never be. The images you painted are so heart felt..Loved it as always..
thank you
a heartfelt thanks for all you are and all you do. hugs and kisses....just little old me :)
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This was great
I felt like I was there. Cold and alone...searching....so many questions unanswered. Then someone came and took me in....still questions, no answers. This is what I got from your poem. It tugged. Very heartfelt. If you can take me with you, you deserve a great mark :-)
touched
i'm deeply touched from the temple to the mind. thank you
nin-
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A touching write for those who know
And anyone else can easily see.
loveless.
A beautiful rendering clothed in Pathos and an under tone of sadness. A little child living with an Uncle and Aunt tries to understand in a child's way ~ his missing parents. A Deep Heartfelt Poem.
Beautiful words..
beautiful poem... but a sad story..
ALL THINGS DO PASS
mournfully we will understand, TK U MLJ LV NV
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