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Zen: of the Blade

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by Anonymous

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by Annora11/14/04

Another work of Art ..

Very nice loved the lesson's.

L~

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by templeminded11/15/04

hey

hey love thanks for the lesson. most you had already taught me though. lol

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by Christina O. Leigh11/15/04

:-)

Some are into
rings and watches
I personally like
pantiless crotches
ask a man to see his knife
but don't ask to use his wife
or the knife will rise
its just not wise
a man without a knife,
may surprise you!

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by LilDarlin11/17/04

Wow~

Such humor~!!! There were so many good lines here I can not just pick one. Loved the whole thing. Never knew there were so many things one MUST know about *the knife*..*Smiles*
Loved this one..Thanks for all the info and fun...

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