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by Anonymous

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by Maria239411/14/04

colorful!!

love the way you drew me home with your words, but never forget, there is often warmth buried beneath the ash, sometimes for a long time, the spot stays warm, is that memory? or wishful thinking, waiting for tinder who knows, wonderful poem :)

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by My Erotic Tale11/14/04

off the tongue~

your words just roll of the tongue~
excellent poem~

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by Christina O. Leigh11/15/04

Beautiful

I felt autumn...making love and loss. You took me with you. If you can draw me in like that, you definitely deserve great marks :-)
Cheers!

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by Christina O. Leigh11/15/04

Beautiful

I felt autumn...making love and loss. You took me with you. That's what I got from this poem. If you can draw me in like that, you definitely deserve great marks :-)
Cheers!

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