All Comments on 'Labor Day Lesbian Rapture Ch. 03'

by susietreasure

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GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 12 years ago
Ah, good.

This was a delicious mix of lesbian sex and bdsm. Again, the thing that made it work, at least for me, was that you did a great job letting the reader into her mind. Simple narration would make this sort of action seem too harsh, too abusive, but her desire for it and her decisions to endure it for the pleasure of her partner... exquisite.

kbone1kbone16 months ago

Wow! This is the best going on in the 3rd chapter

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