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For Love Of Lisa

byJay Richards©
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by Anonymous11/17/04

Bravo! Encore, Encore!!

A very insightful look into the art of kinestics observation and it's application to the dating game. Not to mention this bewing a very sensious story in itself.
Hopefully looking foreward to many sequels.

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by DarkEyedTempest03/19/10

very cute

jay, very nicely written... enjoyed it !

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by Anonymous04/05/10

so sweet

if this is based in reality then she will be lucky to have you sweetheart.

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