All Comments on 'Got S.M.I.L.F.? Ch. 01'

I have enjoyed your work for a couple of years. So glad that you are reposting some of your earlier work here. Now I can reread them or read some of the ones I missed. Keep up the great work

This erotic tale held my interest completely. I even missed lunch! Please hurry with the next installment.

Very well written with emotions and thoughts as well as great action

I loved every minute of this one, I hope to see a lot more from you!

A very excellent and very believable story. The sex was hot but not in an over the top, in your face kind of way. Very sensual. Is there more? I hope so!

Can't wait to read the further adventures of Trixie. Don't forget to bring Brandy back for an encore either. Very hot with the right amount of detail.

Great story, was develpoed perfectly, and I too hope you will continuethe adventures of Trixie and Brandy and the rest of the boys.

Except for the interracial, it was great. Would like more with Trixie, Dennis & Brandy.

I actually know people who have had their relationship slide into a rut similar to that, if perhaps not to that extreme. There is a good balance between story and sex. Sorry it took so long to get around to reading your work, but it seems like I am always overscheduled lately...

They didn't play soccer like this when I was at school! Delicious story!

A wonderful story! It's tough being a teacher with all the hot young studs around, even the best of us have to give in sometimes lol! Need to go somewhere and cool down a bit. X

It wasn't really clear that Brandy was bisexual, nor did the writing hint at any feelings between her and Dennis, so those bits felt a little forced without the proper set up. Over all it was a hot read though.

Sweet story.

My list of Errata

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