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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/18/04

story

fantastic

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by walkingeagle11/20/04

It's also the perfwect story!

VelvetTipper, has once again written a story that the passion and hot sex draw you in! I felt like I was there watching, feeling----I loved it! It's certainly got me fully excited!

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by Anonymous06/04/05

Not enough imagination

While it was a very good story, there are other words to use besides "sex" all the time. It got to be very redundant after a while. Next time experiment with pussy, cunt, vagina,etc or if it's another french story perhaps chatte.

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