All Comments on 'Finn Ch. 04: Goodnight'

You do write well and the story has so much potential, but this chapter is too short with an abrupt ending so, there isn't any story development.Hope the next will be longer and explore more of your characters.

I WISH I was Finn.

Amazing as well as the previous chapters were. Nice work.

Thank for these stories. I find them exciting. I love your characters. Makes me long for a mistress.

Thank you,

E.

wow really great character development. Finn is getting a major mind fuck here! She's so expert and intuitive. Great writing.

Oh wow what a chapter! Great to hear Finns inner monologue wrestling with his desires.

Your writing is incredible